语法自查列表

作者: greenorchid | 来源:发表于2018-12-14 15:13 被阅读4次

    前言:

    这篇自查列表中的解释分析部分都是李笑来老师总结的,我所做的就是添加了例子。这所有的例子都是我自己在教学中发现的真实例句,有些是学生的作文,有些是学生的论文。

    经常查阅,对照,可以内化为自己的语言本能。


    检查自己的作文、翻译也好,帮别人检查作文、翻译也好,以下的列表非常有帮助,因为它罗列了几乎所有人们最常犯的错误:

    1.      单词拼写错误:

    未按照单词的正确拼写方式书写单词,但不包括由于英式英语和美式英语差异所带来的单词拼写差异。

    I haveskied on many different mountants.

     - mountains

    I canmake my dream come ture.

    - true

    I saw your advertisement for a teacher of kindgarten and I would like to apply forthe job.

    - kindergarten

    In my colleage,…

    - college

    Anything is possiable.

    - Anything is possible.

    He has teached for 3 years.

    - He has taught for 3 years.

     

    2. 名词单复数形式错误:

    错误地使用了名词的数,包括:

    (1) 使用了不可数名词的“复数”形式

    I havefound a lot of informations on Chinese culture.

    - I have found a lot of information on Chinese culture.

    (2) 使用了集合名词的“复数”形式

    There aremany peoples in our country who smoke.

    - There are many people in our country who smoke.

    (3) 在应该使用复数的地方使用了单数名词(或反之)等。

    I want tofind out who was the first people who contracted AIDS.

    - I want to find out who was the first person who contracted AIDS.

    I thinkthat it is important for person who drive cars to pay attention to safety.

    - I think that it is important for people who drive cars to pay attention to safety.

    I have attended several speech competition held in Taizhou.

    - I have attended several speech competitions held in Taizhou.

    We wantto make great contribution for our country.

    - We want to make greatcontributionstoour country.

    3. 单数可数名词未受限定:

    句子中出现的单数可数名词之前没有使用限定词,包括冠词、不定代词、指示代词、名词或代词所有格、数词与某些形容词性的物主代词。

    I can do goodjob.

    - I can doagood job.

    I’mwriting to you in the hope that I may obtain opportunity.

    - I’m writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an/the opportunity.

    a excellent writer

    - an excellent writer

    Then,teacher can use news, pictures, songs and videos to attract students.

    - Then,the teacher/teachers can use news, pictures, songs and videos to attractstudents.

    4. 词性错误:

    在选择词汇的过程中忽略了英文词性的特性,仅按照含义来使用词汇,从而发生了词性使用错误的现象。

    I am lackof experience.

    - I lack experience.(v.)

    I am in lack of experience. (n.)

    I am lacking inexperience. (a.)

    I achievebrave, confidence, happiness from skiing.

    - I have achieved bravery, confidence, happiness from skiing.

    I saledmy things such as clothes, furniture.

    - I sold my things such as clothes, furniture.

    It’s alsovery safety.

    - It’s also very safe.

    I am an experiencetraveler.

    - I am an experienced traveler.

    This isreally a challenging work for me.

    - This is really a challenging job for me. /This is really challenging work for me.

    I am an experienced babysit.

    - I am an experienced babysitter.

    I am fullof enthusiastic.

    - I am enthusiastic.

    I am full of enthusiasm.

    I workedvery hard and treated my workmates friendly.

    - I worked very hard and treated my workmates in a friendly way.

    I worked very hard and was friendly to/towards my workmates.

    5. 修饰关系错误:

    违反了词汇修饰的规则,采用了不恰当的修饰关系。包括用形容词修饰动词、形容词修饰形容词,副词修饰名词等。

    I willdisplay my talents and myself to you comprehensive.

    - I will display my talents and myself to you comprehensively.

    There isno definitely answer.

    - There is no definite answer.

    6. 搭配错误:

    句子中出现了不合适的词汇修饰、限制、说明现象,或者错误地使用了固有的词汇搭配形式。

    I lookedthe message carefully.

    - Iread the message carefully.

    I also listento my workmates’ and leader’s advice.

    - I also follow/take my workmates’ and leader’s advice.

    I am verypatient and very like children.

    -  I am very patient andlike children very much.

    Students arefond to take part in English learning by combining English with recreation.

    - Students are fond of taking  …

    With theimprovement of life conditions, …

    - With the improvement of living conditions, …

    They createdmany wonders.

    - They did/worked many wonders.

    I am eager to working again.

    - I am eager to work again.

    7. 词序错误:

    未使用正确的、符合习惯的表述语序来对内容进行陈述。其中包括修饰词顺序错误,该倒装时没有倒装等。

    Not only Ihave passed CET-4 and CET-6, …

    - Not only have I passed …

    I hope sincerely you can give me this job.

    - I sincerely hope you can give me this job.

    The firstcase of AIDS patient was discovered in China in 1985 June.

    - The first case of AIDS patient was discovered in China in June, 1985.

    8. 非谓语动词使用错误:

    错误地使用了现在分词、过去分词、或动词的不定式。其中包括:

    9. 现在分词和过去分词误用:

    作者没有保证逻辑主语与分词的一致性,即当逻辑主语发出动作时使用了过去分词,而在承受动作或状态时使用了现在分词。

    Deeply moving,I cried when I read the book.

    - Deeply moved,I cried when I read the book.

    Please see my resume enclosing for more details.

    - Please see my resume enclosed for more details.

    While earnestly studied the textbook knowledge, I actively participate in all kinds of activities.

    - While earnestly studying the textbook knowledge, I actively participate in all kinds of activities.

    10. 不定式与动名词误用:

    动名词表达的是“状态,性质,心境,抽象,经常性,已发生的”;

    不定式表达的是“目的,结果,原因,具体,一次性,将发生的”。

    I regrettelling you the following sad news.

    - I regret to tell you the following sad news.

    Sorry, Ihave forgotten doing the homework. Can I give it to you tomorrow? 

    - Sorry, I have forgotten to do the homework. …

    11. 介词误用:

    错误地使用了介词。

    I havepassion on be a English teacher.

    - I have passion for beingan English teacher.

    I amwriting to you in the hope of that…

    - I am writing to you in the hope of that…

    I am writing to you in the hope of doing…

    I need a job to start my life in here.

    - I need a job to start my life in here.

    And manyof my articles have been published at famous newspapers and magazines.

    - And many of my articles have been published in famous newspapers and magazines.

    In March29, 2010, …

    -On March 29, 2010, …

    Xxx matcheswith the car very well.

    - Xxx matches the car very well.

    12. 连词误用:

    错误地使用了连词。

    Although Idon’t have much working experience, but I am a hard-working person.

    - Although I don’t have much working experience,but I am a hard-working person.

    - Although I don’t have much working experience, but I am a hard-working person.

    Teachersare not only the students’ instructors and friends as well.

    - Teachers are not only the students’ instructors but friends as well.

    Teachers should arouse students’ curiosity and as well as promote their intrinsic motivation in English learning.

    - Teachers should arouse students’ curiosity and as well as promote their intrinsic motivation in English learning.

    - Teachers should arouse students’ curiosity and as well as promote their intrinsic motivation in English learning.

    13. 关系代词误用:

    在定语从句中错误地使用了关系代词。

    He is mybest friend whom I think will always be there for me.

    - He is my best friend who I think will always be there for me.

    I amhardworking, honest, and easygoing, all of that are my advantages.

    - I am hardworking, honest, and easygoing,all of which are my advantages.

    14. 冠词误用:

    没有分清楚定冠词和不定冠词的区别,或对两个不定冠词的用法不清楚而错误的使用了冠词。

    Being thelawyer is my dream.

    - Being a lawyer is my dream.

    I havepassion on be a English teacher.

    - I have passion for being an English teacher.

    I have always wanted to be a accountant.

    - I have always wanted to be an accountant.

    15. 代词误用或指代不明:

    作者使用的代词的数或者性与名词不匹配,或者读者无法直接判断作者使用的代词所指代的对象。

    When theyshow their worry in answering the questions, teachers should smile at them andsay…

    - When students show their worry in answering the questions, teachers should smile at them and say…

    As agreat teacher, he or she should enjoy he or her teaching work.

    - As a great teacher, he or she should enjoy his or her teaching work.

    … bringsa lot of benefits to our human beings.

    -…brings a lot of benefits to us human beings.

    Theresults of the survey suggested that our students should improve ….

    - The results of the survey suggested that we students should improve ….

    I am goodat communicating with each other.

    I am good at communicating with others/other people.

    We aregood at communicating with each other.

    16. 句子不完整:

    句子中某成分,尤其是构成句子的主干成分残缺。

    I liketeaching others and willing to teach my knowledge to students.

    - I like teaching others and am willing to teach my knowledge to students.

    Affection,as a necessary condition for the existence of mankind, dominating theirspiritual lives.

    - Affection, as a necessary condition for the existence of mankind,dominates their spiritual lives.

    In March29, 2010, two suicide-bomb blasts that killed 39 people in Moscow’s two subwaystations.

    - On March 29, 2010, two suicide-bomb blasts that killed 39 people in Moscow’s two subway stations.

    Technologywhich brings a lot of benefits to us human beings.

    - Technology which brings a lot of benefits to us human beings.

    I starteddrawing when I still a child.

    - I started drawing when I was still a child.

    I lovethe books and crazy about them.

    - I love the books and am crazy about them.

    17. 主谓不一致:

    句子的主语和谓语在“数”上不满足一致关系。

    Mytraining in my college definitely meet your qualifications.

    - My training in my college definitely meets your qualifications.

    The studentusually participate in all kinds of activities.

    - The student usually participates in all kinds of activities.

    Acronyms is easy to read and remember and the number of it is increasing.

    - Acronyms are easy to read and remember and the number of them is increasing.

    18. 违反主句专一原则:

    当一个句子由多个分句组成非简单句时,作者没有确保有且仅有一个主句,即所有从句必须有连词、关系代词或者分号等引导或隔离,但必须保证有唯一的主句。犯此类错误的句子叫做“流水句(run-on sentences)”或“逗号拼凑句(comma splice)”。

    New wordsare growing so fast, most of them come with the development of science and technology,economy and politics, and social cultures.

    - New words are growing so fast, most of which…

    - New words are growing so fast; most of them …

    - New words are growing so fast, and most of them…

    - New words are growing so fast. Most of them …

    Nowadays,modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker, peopletend to seek for largest amounts of information in the shortest time.

    - Nowadays, modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker,and/so people...

    - Nowadays, modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker; people ...

    - Nowadays, modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker. People ...

    I am afour year university graduates, my name is xxx, the profession is theInternational Economics and Trade.

    - I am a university senior. My name is xxx. My majoris the International Economics and Trade.

    19. 比较句错误:

    作者在比较句中的比较主体不一致,即在一个比较句中,作者所引入的两个比较对象不具备同样的本质和属性,即“不可比”,或比较级使用错误等。

    He is muchhandsome than others.

    - He is much more handsome than others.

    20. 并列主体不一致:

    在并列成分中,作者没有做到并列双方在结构、功能、性质方面完全对等。

    We learneverything by making mistakes and correct them.

    - We learn everything by making mistakes and correcting them.

    I thinkthe serious problem is well worth consideration and discuss.

    - I think the serious problem is well worth consideration and discussion.

    21. 时态错误:

    句子谓语动词所使用的时态与句子所在的上下文环境不一致。

    I achievebrave, confidence, happiness from skiing.

    - I have achieved bravery, …

    In thepast two years, I had been a tutor.

    - In the past two years, I have been a tutor.

    I want to be a bank clerk when I attend university. (求职时用语,已经上大学了)

    - I wanted to be a bank clerk when I attended university.

    From then on, -gate is used more and more frequently.

    - From then on, -gate has been used more and more frequently.

    Peoplewho had been infected with AIDS should not be regarded as criminals.

    - People who have been infected with AIDS should not be regarded as criminals.

    Before they became famous, they experience lots of difficulties.

    - Before they became famous, they had experienced lots of difficulties.

    22. 语态错误:

    句子谓语动词所使用的语态(主动/被动)与主语不一致。

    Becauseof infecting with AIDS, he died five days later.

    - Because of being infected with AIDS, he died five days later.

    After ayear of rest, I was completely recovered.

    - After a year of rest, I was completely recovered.

    23. 语气错误:

    句子没有根据上下文采用正确的真实语气或虚拟语气。

    If Icould spend more time on study, I would attend a better university 8 monthsago.

    - If I had spent more time on study, I would have attended a better university 8 months ago.

    If I woulddie tomorrow, I would enjoy today as possible as I can.

    - If I were to die tomorrow, I would enjoy today as possible as I can.

    Were I to die tomorrow,

    If Idiedtomorrow,

    If I should die tomorrow,

    Should I die tomorrow,

    24. 不符合英语习惯用法:

    句子或词等满足语法规则,但是不符合英美国家的母语使用者的表述习惯。

    Most doctors agree that smoking makes a contribution to lung cancer.

    - Most doctors agree that smoking contributes to lung cancer.

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