前言:
这篇自查列表中的解释分析部分都是李笑来老师总结的,我所做的就是添加了例子。这所有的例子都是我自己在教学中发现的真实例句,有些是学生的作文,有些是学生的论文。
经常查阅,对照,可以内化为自己的语言本能。
检查自己的作文、翻译也好,帮别人检查作文、翻译也好,以下的列表非常有帮助,因为它罗列了几乎所有人们最常犯的错误:
1. 单词拼写错误:
未按照单词的正确拼写方式书写单词,但不包括由于英式英语和美式英语差异所带来的单词拼写差异。
I haveskied on many different mountants.
- mountains
I canmake my dream come ture.
- true
I saw your advertisement for a teacher of kindgarten and I would like to apply forthe job.
- kindergarten
In my colleage,…
- college
Anything is possiable.
- Anything is possible.
He has teached for 3 years.
- He has taught for 3 years.
2. 名词单复数形式错误:
错误地使用了名词的数,包括:
(1) 使用了不可数名词的“复数”形式
I havefound a lot of informations on Chinese culture.
- I have found a lot of information on Chinese culture.
(2) 使用了集合名词的“复数”形式
There aremany peoples in our country who smoke.
- There are many people in our country who smoke.
(3) 在应该使用复数的地方使用了单数名词(或反之)等。
I want tofind out who was the first people who contracted AIDS.
- I want to find out who was the first person who contracted AIDS.
I thinkthat it is important for person who drive cars to pay attention to safety.
- I think that it is important for people who drive cars to pay attention to safety.
I have attended several speech competition held in Taizhou.
- I have attended several speech competitions held in Taizhou.
We wantto make great contribution for our country.
- We want to make greatcontributionstoour country.
3. 单数可数名词未受限定:
句子中出现的单数可数名词之前没有使用限定词,包括冠词、不定代词、指示代词、名词或代词所有格、数词与某些形容词性的物主代词。
I can do goodjob.
- I can doagood job.
I’mwriting to you in the hope that I may obtain opportunity.
- I’m writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an/the opportunity.
a excellent writer
- an excellent writer
Then,teacher can use news, pictures, songs and videos to attract students.
- Then,the teacher/teachers can use news, pictures, songs and videos to attractstudents.
4. 词性错误:
在选择词汇的过程中忽略了英文词性的特性,仅按照含义来使用词汇,从而发生了词性使用错误的现象。
I am lackof experience.
- I lack experience.(v.)
I am in lack of experience. (n.)
I am lacking inexperience. (a.)
I achievebrave, confidence, happiness from skiing.
- I have achieved bravery, confidence, happiness from skiing.
I saledmy things such as clothes, furniture.
- I sold my things such as clothes, furniture.
It’s alsovery safety.
- It’s also very safe.
I am an experiencetraveler.
- I am an experienced traveler.
This isreally a challenging work for me.
- This is really a challenging job for me. /This is really challenging work for me.
I am an experienced babysit.
- I am an experienced babysitter.
I am fullof enthusiastic.
- I am enthusiastic.
I am full of enthusiasm.
I workedvery hard and treated my workmates friendly.
- I worked very hard and treated my workmates in a friendly way.
I worked very hard and was friendly to/towards my workmates.
5. 修饰关系错误:
违反了词汇修饰的规则,采用了不恰当的修饰关系。包括用形容词修饰动词、形容词修饰形容词,副词修饰名词等。
I willdisplay my talents and myself to you comprehensive.
- I will display my talents and myself to you comprehensively.
There isno definitely answer.
- There is no definite answer.
6. 搭配错误:
句子中出现了不合适的词汇修饰、限制、说明现象,或者错误地使用了固有的词汇搭配形式。
I lookedthe message carefully.
- Iread the message carefully.
I also listento my workmates’ and leader’s advice.
- I also follow/take my workmates’ and leader’s advice.
I am verypatient and very like children.
- I am very patient andlike children very much.
Students arefond to take part in English learning by combining English with recreation.
- Students are fond of taking …
With theimprovement of life conditions, …
- With the improvement of living conditions, …
They createdmany wonders.
- They did/worked many wonders.
I am eager to working again.
- I am eager to work again.
7. 词序错误:
未使用正确的、符合习惯的表述语序来对内容进行陈述。其中包括修饰词顺序错误,该倒装时没有倒装等。
Not only Ihave passed CET-4 and CET-6, …
- Not only have I passed …
I hope sincerely you can give me this job.
- I sincerely hope you can give me this job.
The firstcase of AIDS patient was discovered in China in 1985 June.
- The first case of AIDS patient was discovered in China in June, 1985.
8. 非谓语动词使用错误:
错误地使用了现在分词、过去分词、或动词的不定式。其中包括:
9. 现在分词和过去分词误用:
作者没有保证逻辑主语与分词的一致性,即当逻辑主语发出动作时使用了过去分词,而在承受动作或状态时使用了现在分词。
Deeply moving,I cried when I read the book.
- Deeply moved,I cried when I read the book.
Please see my resume enclosing for more details.
- Please see my resume enclosed for more details.
While earnestly studied the textbook knowledge, I actively participate in all kinds of activities.
- While earnestly studying the textbook knowledge, I actively participate in all kinds of activities.
10. 不定式与动名词误用:
动名词表达的是“状态,性质,心境,抽象,经常性,已发生的”;
不定式表达的是“目的,结果,原因,具体,一次性,将发生的”。
I regrettelling you the following sad news.
- I regret to tell you the following sad news.
Sorry, Ihave forgotten doing the homework. Can I give it to you tomorrow?
- Sorry, I have forgotten to do the homework. …
11. 介词误用:
错误地使用了介词。
I havepassion on be a English teacher.
- I have passion for beingan English teacher.
I amwriting to you in the hope of that…
- I am writing to you in the hope of that…
I am writing to you in the hope of doing…
I need a job to start my life in here.
- I need a job to start my life in here.
And manyof my articles have been published at famous newspapers and magazines.
- And many of my articles have been published in famous newspapers and magazines.
In March29, 2010, …
-On March 29, 2010, …
Xxx matcheswith the car very well.
- Xxx matches the car very well.
12. 连词误用:
错误地使用了连词。
Although Idon’t have much working experience, but I am a hard-working person.
- Although I don’t have much working experience,but I am a hard-working person.
- Although I don’t have much working experience, but I am a hard-working person.
Teachersare not only the students’ instructors and friends as well.
- Teachers are not only the students’ instructors but friends as well.
Teachers should arouse students’ curiosity and as well as promote their intrinsic motivation in English learning.
- Teachers should arouse students’ curiosity and as well as promote their intrinsic motivation in English learning.
- Teachers should arouse students’ curiosity and as well as promote their intrinsic motivation in English learning.
13. 关系代词误用:
在定语从句中错误地使用了关系代词。
He is mybest friend whom I think will always be there for me.
- He is my best friend who I think will always be there for me.
I amhardworking, honest, and easygoing, all of that are my advantages.
- I am hardworking, honest, and easygoing,all of which are my advantages.
14. 冠词误用:
没有分清楚定冠词和不定冠词的区别,或对两个不定冠词的用法不清楚而错误的使用了冠词。
Being thelawyer is my dream.
- Being a lawyer is my dream.
I havepassion on be a English teacher.
- I have passion for being an English teacher.
I have always wanted to be a accountant.
- I have always wanted to be an accountant.
15. 代词误用或指代不明:
作者使用的代词的数或者性与名词不匹配,或者读者无法直接判断作者使用的代词所指代的对象。
When theyshow their worry in answering the questions, teachers should smile at them andsay…
- When students show their worry in answering the questions, teachers should smile at them and say…
As agreat teacher, he or she should enjoy he or her teaching work.
- As a great teacher, he or she should enjoy his or her teaching work.
… bringsa lot of benefits to our human beings.
-…brings a lot of benefits to us human beings.
Theresults of the survey suggested that our students should improve ….
- The results of the survey suggested that we students should improve ….
I am goodat communicating with each other.
- I am good at communicating with others/other people.
We aregood at communicating with each other.
16. 句子不完整:
句子中某成分,尤其是构成句子的主干成分残缺。
I liketeaching others and willing to teach my knowledge to students.
- I like teaching others and am willing to teach my knowledge to students.
Affection,as a necessary condition for the existence of mankind, dominating theirspiritual lives.
- Affection, as a necessary condition for the existence of mankind,dominates their spiritual lives.
In March29, 2010, two suicide-bomb blasts that killed 39 people in Moscow’s two subwaystations.
- On March 29, 2010, two suicide-bomb blasts that killed 39 people in Moscow’s two subway stations.
Technologywhich brings a lot of benefits to us human beings.
- Technology which brings a lot of benefits to us human beings.
I starteddrawing when I still a child.
- I started drawing when I was still a child.
I lovethe books and crazy about them.
- I love the books and am crazy about them.
17. 主谓不一致:
句子的主语和谓语在“数”上不满足一致关系。
Mytraining in my college definitely meet your qualifications.
- My training in my college definitely meets your qualifications.
The studentusually participate in all kinds of activities.
- The student usually participates in all kinds of activities.
Acronyms is easy to read and remember and the number of it is increasing.
- Acronyms are easy to read and remember and the number of them is increasing.
18. 违反主句专一原则:
当一个句子由多个分句组成非简单句时,作者没有确保有且仅有一个主句,即所有从句必须有连词、关系代词或者分号等引导或隔离,但必须保证有唯一的主句。犯此类错误的句子叫做“流水句(run-on sentences)”或“逗号拼凑句(comma splice)”。
New wordsare growing so fast, most of them come with the development of science and technology,economy and politics, and social cultures.
- New words are growing so fast, most of which…
- New words are growing so fast; most of them …
- New words are growing so fast, and most of them…
- New words are growing so fast. Most of them …
Nowadays,modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker, peopletend to seek for largest amounts of information in the shortest time.
- Nowadays, modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker,and/so people...
- Nowadays, modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker; people ...
- Nowadays, modern social life and working pace are becoming quicker and quicker. People ...
I am afour year university graduates, my name is xxx, the profession is theInternational Economics and Trade.
- I am a university senior. My name is xxx. My majoris the International Economics and Trade.
19. 比较句错误:
作者在比较句中的比较主体不一致,即在一个比较句中,作者所引入的两个比较对象不具备同样的本质和属性,即“不可比”,或比较级使用错误等。
He is muchhandsome than others.
- He is much more handsome than others.
20. 并列主体不一致:
在并列成分中,作者没有做到并列双方在结构、功能、性质方面完全对等。
We learneverything by making mistakes and correct them.
- We learn everything by making mistakes and correcting them.
I thinkthe serious problem is well worth consideration and discuss.
- I think the serious problem is well worth consideration and discussion.
21. 时态错误:
句子谓语动词所使用的时态与句子所在的上下文环境不一致。
I achievebrave, confidence, happiness from skiing.
- I have achieved bravery, …
In thepast two years, I had been a tutor.
- In the past two years, I have been a tutor.
I want to be a bank clerk when I attend university. (求职时用语,已经上大学了)
- I wanted to be a bank clerk when I attended university.
From then on, -gate is used more and more frequently.
- From then on, -gate has been used more and more frequently.
Peoplewho had been infected with AIDS should not be regarded as criminals.
- People who have been infected with AIDS should not be regarded as criminals.
Before they became famous, they experience lots of difficulties.
- Before they became famous, they had experienced lots of difficulties.
22. 语态错误:
句子谓语动词所使用的语态(主动/被动)与主语不一致。
Becauseof infecting with AIDS, he died five days later.
- Because of being infected with AIDS, he died five days later.
After ayear of rest, I was completely recovered.
- After a year of rest, I was completely recovered.
23. 语气错误:
句子没有根据上下文采用正确的真实语气或虚拟语气。
If Icould spend more time on study, I would attend a better university 8 monthsago.
- If I had spent more time on study, I would have attended a better university 8 months ago.
If I woulddie tomorrow, I would enjoy today as possible as I can.
- If I were to die tomorrow, I would enjoy today as possible as I can.
Were I to die tomorrow,
If Idiedtomorrow,
If I should die tomorrow,
Should I die tomorrow,
24. 不符合英语习惯用法:
句子或词等满足语法规则,但是不符合英美国家的母语使用者的表述习惯。
Most doctors agree that smoking makes a contribution to lung cancer.
- Most doctors agree that smoking contributes to lung cancer.
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