六级写作
话题：教育
【题目要求】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the topic：My View on Online Education. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【写作指导】
para 1: introducing the basic information of online education
para 2: explaining the reason why online education is popular and give some details
para 3: giving your own opinions on this issue and make a conclusion.
【优秀范文】
Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To some extent, it has become part of our daily life. On the Internet, we can find entertainment through video games and social apps. But recently another useful online activity has entered our lives. That is online education.
Why is online education so popular? For one thing, the quick development of the internet has provided many people a chance to attend class given by famous teachers regardless of distance and background. For another thing, compared with having classes at school, online education saves our time, energy and money. Most importantly, the schedule of online study is much more flexible than traditional class so that we can have a free choice to continue our learning.
All in all, online education provides the society with better opportunities and better choices. I think the overall educational level in the community can be brought to a higher level if we use online classes correctly.
【好词好句】
To some extent 在某种程度上
entertainment 娱乐
regardless of 不管；不顾
the schedule of 关于……的计划
All in all。总而言之
be brought to a higher level 更上一层楼
have a free choice to 有自由选择的余地
overall 总体的; 全面的; 综合的
1. For one thing, the quick development of the internet has provided many people a chance to attend class given by famous teachers regardless of distance and background.
一方面，互联网的快速发展使许多人无论距离和背景如何，有机会参加由知名教师提供的课程。
2. Most importantly, the schedule of online study is much more flexible than traditional class so that we can have a free choice to continue our learning.
最重要的是，在线学习的时间安排比传统课程更灵活，这样我们就可以自由选择继续学习。
3. I think the overall educational level in the community can be brought to a higher level if we use online classes correctly.
我认为如果我们正确使用在线课程，社区的整体教育可以提升到更高的水平。
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