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Ch 17|On Writing Well (11.15)

Ch 17|On Writing Well (11.15)

作者: doubleand | 来源:发表于2017-11-15 21:33 被阅读0次

    Chapter 17: Sports

    1 总结

    行话用的太多就没有新鲜感了,容易给外行人倦怠感(weariness)。

    对同一位运动员用过多的同义词,反而让读者分不清谁是谁。用最容易唤起读者画面感的词就可以了,因为读者往往更关注比赛结果。

    数字用的太多,很容易让读者摸不着头脑。只捡最重要的说就行了。

    运动员也是普通人,要将运动员和大众产生的联系(human bond)写出来。

    体育涉及很多社会问题,这也是体育类文章的着笔之处。

    体育记者要报道事实,不要加入过多的臆测。(codes of honor)(一级方程式赛车手的例子看的人很激动)

    最优秀的体育作家是将体育和社会历史结合的作家。

    2 摘抄

    1. Those are the values to look for when you write about sport: people and places, time and transition.

    体育写作要体现的价值:人和地点,时间和转变。

    2. Hang around the track and the stable, the stadium and the rink. Observe closely. Interview in depth. Listen to old-timers. Ponder the changes. Write well.

    Zinsser关于写好体育写作的建议:去现场仔细观察(place),进行深度采访(people)。听过来人的讲述(time),思考变化(transition)。最后好好写。

    3 Thoughts

    Honest portraiture is only one of many new realities in what used to be a fairy-tale world.

    因为没怎么看过体育文章,就不评论体育相关了。在充满过度解读、自说自话的现在,事实成为了最稀缺的资源。比如最近的江歌遇害案,由于真相扑朔迷离,刘鑫一方可以打苦情牌。微博上经常上热搜的名人八卦,所谓的社会热点,真实的成分能有多少?而网友可以选择随意站队,不管真相如何,只选择自己最愿意相信的部分。长此以往,我们会失去判断真假,深入思考的能力。这是快时代、科技时代的通病。我认为作者说的深入考察是一个很好的解决办法。关注热点,不要只去看爆点是什么,要去看起因,发展的过程,并思考成因背后的逻辑。人物和地点,时间和转变,似乎也是个通用的法则。

    4 Word(s)

    1. settle for 勉强接受,将就

    They please us because the writer cared about using fresh imagery in a journalistic form where his competitors settled for the same old stuff.

    【义】to content oneself with : be content with

    【句】They want $2500 for it, but they might settle for $2000. 他们想卖 2500 美元,但 2000 美元他们可能也会接受。

    Since you have no spirit, I have to settle for beer. 既然你没有烈性酒,我就喝点啤酒吧。

    2. with a heavy hand 压制地,专制地;苛刻地,严厉地

    The first and toughest of the [baseball] overlords was Kenesaw Mountain Landis, who came to power in 1920 and ruled with a heavy hand until his death in 1944.

    【义】If you say that someone such as the ruler of a country treats people with a heavy hand, you are criticizing them because they are very strict and severe with them. [DISAPPROVAL]

    【句】The law will punish offenders with a heavy hand.


    体育记者:推荐Red Smith (His style was not only graceful; it was strong enough to carry strong convictions.)

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