第一段
paragraph1
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所有的主语:a French journalit, Feldman, Max Ernst, Cage, my parents, My wife, we;
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主语的流动:从a French journalit,到Feldman,再到my parents,再到my wife,再回到Feldman;
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总结:从a French journalit的到访引入话题,然后Feldman讲述自己的routime:从每天的daily routine,到工作的状态、环境、内容,再到有了妻子之后Feldman每天的routine。
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. I always worked at something other than music. (music抽象名词)
2. Usually I create in the midst of a lot of bustle, of work.(bustle抽象名词)
3. My parents were in “business” and I participated in their worries.(worries具体名词)
第二段
paragraph2
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所有的主语:Feldman, the idea, external conditions, my concern;
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主语的流动:从Feldman,到the idea,再到external conditions、my concern,再到Feldman;
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总结:本段在描述一个strategy,Feldman从这个习惯中获益很多;
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. My concern at times is nothing more than establishing a series of practical considerations that will enable me to work.(concern抽象名词)
大总结:
第一段讲述Feldman每天的routine,虽然这个toutine让他生活有秩序,并没激发灵感;第二段讲到一个strategy/习惯,tourine + 这个习惯让他在编曲中产生ideas。
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