2017-12-21

title:  college is not an lvory tower

topic sentence :  college means many possibilty

sub-topic1 

ln the college,we can meet  many new things ,they will  make you more active

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college is more close to  social  life,so we must learn to change to adapt to it

title:  why  l  like to learn english

topic sentence:  english is a fun language,l hope that l can get to know it well

sub-topic1

ln this world,language is a fantastic thing,many time ,it make our world more nice

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we must be a good learner

title：deferent love of my parents

topic Father and mother show love differently,  father's love is not easy to detect and mother's is more subtle（细微的）

1. Father is more willing to suffer silently

2. mother will care about your life

title:  my wish to myself

topic    I want to change myself physically and mentally

1.Can restrain （约束myself behavior, improve self-control

2.Have a strong enough heart

title:  Why aren't older people respected

topic    Perhaps because of the young people's 'neglect of traditional civilization and  lack of moral concept

1.There are many times when our  traditional civilization is forgotten

2.And sometimes there is a lack of  compassion and love