第一段
paragraph1
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所有的主语:Beethoven, his breakfast, Beethoven's productivity;
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主语的流动:从Beethoven,到his breakfast,再回到Beethoven;
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总结:讲述Beethoven从起床到下午3点的routine。
第二段:
paragraph2
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所有的主语:Beethoven, evenings, supper;
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主语的流动:从Beethoven,到evenings、supper,再到Beethoven;
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总结:讲述Beethoven从下午3点到晚上睡觉之前的routine,包括他做的事、吃的饭。
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. Beethoven embarked on a long, vigorous walk.(walk可数,当用单数)
2. He always carried a pencil and a couple of sheets of music paper in his pocket.(paper,物质名词,sheets of paper)
3. Supper was usually a simple affair—a bowl of soup.(affair,具体事物)
第三段:
paragraph3
paragraph3
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所有的主语:washing and bathing, he, there, the servants, this, the floor;
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主语的流动:从washing and bathing,到Beethoven,再到these(这些行为)、the servants、the floor,再回到Beethoven;
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总结:这一整段在讲他的关于洗澡的不同寻常的习惯,这个习惯帮助他进入沉思,带来灵感。
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. These were moments of deep meditation.(moment,时刻,可数名词)
2. And the master was totally unaware of the excess of inspiration under his feet!(inspiration,灵感,抽象概念)
大总结:
第一、二段描述Bethoven每天的routine,第三段描述他的一个关于洗澡的不同寻常的习惯。
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