原稿：
Today, our teachers had a tug-of-war competition. The students were all excited to see their teachers. I wanted to watch the competition too, but it was so crowded that I couldn't see anything.
In my opinion, although the competition was exciting, the etiquette for watching the game is important.
Correctly：
Today, our teachers had a tug-of-war competition. The students were all excited to see their teachers. I also wanted to watch the game, but it was so crowded that I couldn't see anything.
Although the competition was exciting, we'd better keep the etiquette for watching the game.
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