要求：描写cheetah 捕猎过程，150到200字。这次不再写cheetah外形，而是合理想象这个捕猎的时刻如何发生结束，训练动词、时间With the August coming, the temperature in
this prairie increases quickly. For there being less big tree to protect and highest temperature, grasses and other plants on this prairie become sun-scorched soon, being a good burrow for beast to camouflage.
Lurking in the sun-scorched grasses both for hunting and having a rest, cheetah noticed a stray antelope through its sensitive ears. It doesn’t run for this prey immediately but to wait for the antelope getting more closely. Judged the distance, this predator takes action. The cheetah s reaches out its massive paws to prey. When the antelope realizes the stalker, its arch enemy already is being close to it. It has to run for its life. A life-and-death competition is on show. Cheetah is famous for the speed when they are catching their preys. But for extraordinary speed drains their energy pretty quickly, the time to catch the antelope is limited. At this competition, this beast is confronted with another problem that antelope is not a slow animal and it doesn’t want to cave at all.
After several minutes, the speed of the twois gradually slow down. Finding the change on thespeedof own prey, wanting to catch this chance to have a feast, cheetah speeds up. Heardthe voice from its back, desiring to get rid of the paw from its arch enemy, antelopemakes a crash stop and takes a sudden turn. Thinking running straightly for antelope, cheetah doesn’t expect this nimble maneuver before. Cheetah catchesnothing. Thanks to this dangerous split second, antelope gets a chance toescape from the jaws of this beast running out of energy. With a short moment,antelope backs to its ethnic group.
This life-and-death competition comes to anend.
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感受：从句比重少了，写起来比之前要流畅了些。
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