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很好的自夸

很好的自夸

作者: 非夷非惠 | 来源:发表于2021-04-01 09:03 被阅读0次

                                                   

              罗尔德·达尔很详细地写了他在中学时代获得愉悦的两件事情(Gamesand Photography):比赛和拍照。在这两个事情上,他都获得了巨大的成功。比赛,是学校校队的队长。拍照,不仅是在学校内取得巨大的成功,也走出了校园,最后走向了世界。

              这里有一个相当精彩的细节描写:

    The exhibition was rather a success, and masters who hardly ever spoken to me over the past four years would come up and say things like, ‘ It’s quite extraordinary ‘…’ We didn’t know we had an artist in our midst’… ‘Are they for sale?’

    这是很好的自夸。用周围熟悉的人的那种,“我竟然不知道高手就在我身边”,来自夸。会有说服力,哪怕是读者,也会会心一笑,表示理解的。

    还有一处细节,是最高奖项的罗列:

              You may not believe it, but when I was eighteen I used to win prizes and medals from the Royal Photographic Society in London, and from other places like the Photographic Society of Holland, I even got a lovely big bronze medal from the Egyptian Photographic Society of Cairo,and I still have the photograph that won it.

    这也是很好的自夸。用社会对你的评价,奖项就是其中一种。人毕竟是存在于社会上的,需要一定权威的机构来证明你的实力。所以,不能视奖项如粪土。可以在拿到之后,像居里夫人一样,不在乎。拿到之前,还是要在乎的,要去努力追求的。

              当然,对自己获奖的作品,要用自己的方式来诠释。譬如,他就把这副珍贵的照片描写为一次训练中的不经意的捕捉。完全是符合常理的一种获得,因为他是顶级摄影大师呀。

    这是最高水准的自夸。好喜欢。

              This is the largest unsupported arch on earth and I took the photograph while I was training out there for the RAF in 1940. I was flying  over the desert solo in an old Hawker Hartbi plane and I had my camera round my neck. When I spotted the huge arch standing alone in a sea of sand, I dropped one wing and hung in my straps and let go of the stick while I took aim and clicked the shutter. It cam out fine.

    他在1940年拍下了泰锡封拱门。

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