Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that today the Internet is playing an important role in education, with increasing range and availability of online courses. But I think it is ridiculous to claim that this will lead to the disappearance of traditional schools.
中间段落的结构: Topic sentence + developing sentences
注意每一个中间段落必须有一个topic sentence,这个topic sentence点明话题，同时指明这个段落要讲的内容。
接下来给出2个topic sentence （一般写2-4个，3个最常见）
1. Firstly, it is doubted that students can learn as efficiently on the Internet at home as in traditional schools.
2. Apart from academic education, school education also creates opportunities for students to gain many valuable social skills.
接下来展开以上两个topic sentences.
在议论的写作中，topic sentence的展开常用两种办法:1.举例子； 2：讲道理
讲道理常用两种办法:1.解释原因； 2. 阐述结果；偶尔使用第三种:作对比
范例
1. Firstly, it is doubted that students can learn as efficiently on the Internet at home as in traditional schools. One property of modern technology is harmful to any learning mind – it distracts. When learners are searching for information online, the Internet provides them with not only relevant results to make use of, but also external links to click. By contrast, in schools there are teachers supervising them, like checking their attendance, and managing their performance during classes. Also, there are peers with whom students can discuss when they encounter problems in study. (93 words. Topic sentence+ 解释网络学习效率不高的原因+ 对比，学校学习效率高的原因)
2. Apart from academic education, school education also creates opportunities for students to gain many valuable social skills. Teachers educate large groups of students together, which means that they must train students to work with their peers and respect other members of the class. Students also learn to behave sensibly in lessons, regardless of the distractions around them, and to follow instructions given to them by teaching staff. These behavioural skills will be crucial in later life. In the workplace, for example, adults are expected to work in teams, listen to each other, and follow the instructions of a manager or company director. (102 words, topic sentence+ social skills的列举+ 这些skills的好处是什么)
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