2019-07-23

作者: 未名吾梦 | 来源:发表于2019-07-23 14:16 被阅读0次

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习作誊写：

日期

December 22nd, 2018

称呼

Dear parents,

第一段

[S1] I am writing to express my deeply missing for you. [S2] I have stayed in school for half a year for preparing NETEM. [S3] The most concerning things for me is yours physical condition.

第二段

[S1] Only in the way of health, can we live better. [S2] So, I want to give your some suggestions about how to live in health. [S3] Eating is the matter for healthy and we can’t ignore keeping balance diet. [S4] In addition, morning exercise also can strengthen our physical quality.

第三段

[S1] Should your continue to hard work? [S2] I believe that I can make yours in better life by my efforts. [S3] I am looking forward to our meeting.

落款

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

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