体裁：记叙文
主题：个人经历
时态：一般过去时
人称：第三人称
Genre: Narrative
Theme:Personal experience
Tense:Generally past
Person:Third person
李东上课时在玩手机，被老师发现了。在办公室里，李东不承认自己玩手机。老师沉默了，然后讲了个故事，感动了李东。李东意识到老师是为自己好，于是承认了错误，并保证以后不再犯类似错误。最后，李东感谢老师的帮助和善意。
Time： one day
Place： In the class and in the office.
Characters： Li Dong and his teacher.
Beginning: Li Dong played with a mobile phone in class.
Development: The teacher talked with little in the office.
Climax: The teacher shared a story with li dong.
Ending : Li Dong realized his mistake and sent his teacher.
One day Li Dong was doing something playing a mobile phone in his class when his teacher saw all this later in the office, his teacher asked him what he used the mobile phone to do and why did he so Li Dong said he didn't play with any mobile phone, which his teacher didn't expect. Faced with such a situation, his teacher was puzzled and kept silent for a while. Then he told a story to Li Dong which moved him deeply. Li Dong realized his teacher showed great concern for him. So he admitted his playing a mobile phone in his class and decided not to make similar mistakes anymore in future. In the end, Li Dong thanked his teachers for his help and kindness.
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