师北宸21天写作训练营 DAY 1
必读:奥巴马《我们为什么要上学》
摘录三个金句:
1 I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that’s why I succeed. -------MichaelJordan
我一生不停地失败、失败再失败,这就是我现在成功的原因。
---------迈克尔•乔丹
2 No one’s born being good at all things. You become good at things through hard work.
没有哪一个人生来就擅长做什么事情,只有努力训练才能培养出优秀的技能。
3 I expect you to put your best effort into everything you do. I expect great things from each of you.
我希望你们尽心尽力去做自己着手的每一件事,我希望你们每一个人都有所成就。
摘录三段优秀段落:
1 But at the end of the day, we can have the most dedicated teachers, the most supportive parents, the best schools in the world -- and none of it will make a difference, none of it will matter unless all of you fulfill your responsibilities, unlessyou show up to those schools, unless you pay attention to those teachers,unless you listen to your parents and grandparents and other adults and put in the hard work it takes to succeed.
但哪怕这一切都达到最好,哪怕我们有最尽职的教师、最好的家长、和最优秀的学校,假如你们不去履行自己的责任的话,那么这一切努力都不会带来不同。——除非你每天准时去上学、除非你认真地听老师讲课、除非你把父母、长辈和其他大人们说的话放在心上并且肯付出成功所必需的努力,否则这一切都会无足轻重。
2 That’s what I want to focus on today: the responsibility each of you has for your education. I want to start with the responsibility you have to yourself. Every single one of you has something that you’re good at. Every single one of you has something to offer. And you have a responsibility to yourself to discover what that is. That’s the opportunity an education can provide.
而这就是我今天讲话的主题:自我教育是每一个人的责任。首先,我想谈谈你们对于自己有什么责任。你们中的每一个人都会有自己擅长的东西,每一个人都是有用之材,而发现自己的才能是什么,就是你们要对自己担起的责任。教育给你们提供了发现自己才能的机会。
3 And no matter what you want to do with your life, I guarantee that you’ll need an education to do it. You want to be a doctor, or a teacher, or a police officer? You want to be a nurse or an architect, a lawyer or a member of our military? You’re going to need a good education for every single one of those careers. You cannot drop out of school and just drop into a good job. You’ve got to train for it and work for it and learn for it.
而且,我可以向你保证,不管你将来想要做什么,你都需要相应的教育。你想当一名医生、当一名教师或当一名警官?你想成为护士、成为建筑设计师、律师或军人?无论你选择哪一种职业,良好的教育都必不可少,这世上不存在不把书念完就能拿到好工作的美梦,任何工作,都需要你的汗水、训练与学习。
万能写作法拆解:观点+案例+总结
观点:自我教育包括努力发掘自身潜力培养技能、为自己争取获得良好教育的机会等等,是每个人自己的责任。
案例1:奥巴马在单身家庭中长大,2岁起由妈妈抚养,曾因没钱上学,由妈妈在家里教他相关知识。但奥巴马没有放弃自我教育、发掘自身潜力的责任,最终幸运地进入名校接受了良好的教育,并且通过自己的努力当选美国总统。
案例2:奥巴马夫人米歇尔·奥巴马的父母没有读过大学,也没有什么财产,但他们努力工作,米歇尔·奥巴马同样承担起了自我教育的责任,努力学习,最终取得美国哈佛大学法学院的法律博士学位。
案例3:美国德克萨斯州的贾斯敏·佩雷兹(Jazmin Perez),刚进学校时,根本不会说英语,她父母没有受过高等教育,周边的人也几乎没人上过大学,但她从未放弃自我教育的责任,勤奋努力,取得了优异的成绩,攻读着名校的博士学位。
总结:一个人出身、长相、经济条件和家庭状况等等,都不能成为其放弃自我教育或挖掘自身潜力的借口。命运由自己书写,未来由自己掌握,自我教育是每个人自己的责任。
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