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Many students in our school are absent because of the illness. But in our class, few students got ill, and they all got well fast. I think that's because we do exercise every day with our teacher. I learnt that exercise can really make us healthy. Therefore, I'd like to do more exercise to keep health.
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Many students in our school are absent because of the illness. But a few students got ill in my class, and they all got well fast. I think that's because we do exercise every day with our teacher. I learned that exercise makes us healthy. Therefore, I'd like to do more exercise to keep me fit.
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