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一、从语法角度
原句1：El Niño, a Spanish term for “the Christ child”, was named by South American fisherman who…
（相当于：N, a …, 谓语， 定语从句）
仿写：Online rating, a term for judging the popularity of products online, enjoys high popularity among the young who feel that it can reduce the amount of time wasted on shopping. （2018江苏高考）
原句2：El Niño sees warm water, collected over several years in the western Pacific, flow back eastwards when winds that normally blow westwards weaken, or sometimes the other way round.
(sth see…, done over several years, do.)
仿写：These days sees online ratings, invented by some online companies, enjoy high popularity among the young.
(2)短语句型的角度
原句3：Rich countries gain more from powerful Niño, on balance, than they lose.
(sb gain more from…than he loses.)
仿写：Consumers gain more from online ratings, on balance, than they lose. （2017江苏高考）
on ˈbalance
after considering all the information 总的来说
✘ On balance, the company has had a successful year. 总的来说，公司这一年业绩很好。
(3)名词词块的角度
原句4：The total rise in agricultural incomes in rich countries is greater than the fall in poor ones.
仿写：The total rise in people’s income in China makes a big difference.（2017江苏高考）
三、语法和词块的混合的角度
必须强调的是，把语法结构和词块等结合进行仿写才是最有效的，虽然这看起来就是戴着脚镣跳舞，但这样才能让写作的句子更地道。
原句5：Though heavy rains brought about by El Niño may relieve the drought in California, they are likely to cause surface flooding and other disasters.
✘（Though sth brought about by…may relieve…, they are likely to cause…）
仿写：Though convenience caused by online ratings may relieve people’s confusion in shopping, they are likely to make people fall into producers’ traps. （2018江苏高考）
1.因果关系阐述句
原句6：But such Niño come with months of warning, and so much is known about how they happen that governments can prepare.
仿写：Online ratings comes with all kinds of distrust, and so little is known about the truth that many consumers resist it.
原句7：Stronger bridges mean villages are less likely to be left without food and medicine after floods.
仿写：【It means that】 consumers 【are less likely to be left 】helpless after being tricked.
原句8：civil conflict is related to El Niño harmful effects—and the poorer the country, the stronger the link.
仿写：People’s income【 is related to 】the prosperity of movies—and 【the higher the income, the stronger the link. 】（2017年江苏高考）
原句10：Better sewers (下水道【make it less likely that 】heavy rain 【is followed by】 an outbreak of the disease of bad stomach. 阻止什么带来什么样的后果
改写句子
功能，语法，语块
汪子讲外刊
GM food
genetically modified food转基因食物
relax its ban on
表示争论焦点句型
✘The growth of genetically modified (GM) foodcrops in China has always been a topic in the limelight.
✘Opinions differ as to the growth of genetically modified (GM) food crops in China.
✘Much ink has been spilt on the growth of genetically modified (GM) food crops in China.
✘No consensus has been reached on the growth of genetically modified (GM) food crops in China
✘People tend to become argumentative when talking about the growth of genetically modified (GM)food crops in China
（✘1） The discussion about the growth of genetically modified (GM) food crops in China has polarized recently
✘Conflicts emerge about/as to the growth of genetically modified (GM) food crops in China
✘Ever since ……the growth of genetically modified(GM) food crops in China has been on everyone’s lips
relate等于recount讲述叙述自己的亲身经历
lean time不景气的时期
guaranteen China's ✘ was still a serious worry
✘occupy the comanding【 heights】 of占据制高点and not yield that ground to any不让别人抢占
occupy the moral heights of占据道德制高点
yield benefits产出利润
【grow 变得 【have grown】much more conservative】
【go 变得加坏的变化】
✘The first is anxiety among……
✘the other is a worry that……无生命主语体现文字生动性
staple主要的
✘Concerns about ……are causing…… to rethink.
✘Worries may ease if
honeypot吸引人的事物地方
put off sb等于disappoint sb
meet the needs of
ape效仿
catering specifically to Chinese visitors迎合
make fewer concessions做出较小让步
put sb ahead of its competitors
rate sth as more important than
认为✘更重要
bitterly disappointed
【would-be shoppers
prospective
potential shoppers】
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