【题目要求】
假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：
(I)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；
(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
(3)希望从中有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可遥当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯:
(3)开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. __________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【写作指导】
建议信注意事项
1. 审题：
确定文章体裁：建议信
人称：一般以第一人称为主
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主
2. 确定文章结构：
篇首句：说明写信目的；
篇中句：介绍详情、提出具体建议；
篇尾句：提出希望采纳建议，并祝福；
本篇书面表达要求考生写一封电子邮件，为半开放式作文。可分为三段来写：
第一段：话题+论点（得知什么消息+写电子邮件什么意图）；
第二段：具体内容（介绍你喜欢的讲座话题，选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容等）；
第三段：总结和希望（希望从中有何收获等）。
【好词好句】
篇首句：说明写信目的
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
篇中句：介绍详情、提出具体建议
1. I'd like to suggest that... 我想要建议......
2. In my opinion,... 在我看来，......
3. If I were you, I would... 如果我是你，我会......
4. You'd better do.../not do... 你最好/最好不......
5. It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。
6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。
7. As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。
8. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
还有，试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样，你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
最后但也是很重要的一点是，你应该养成记日记的习惯，这会帮助你提高英语写作，也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。
篇尾句：提出希望采纳建议，并祝福
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
2. Best wishes!
(给你)最美好的祝愿!
3. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
4. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
5. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
【优秀范文】
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. As far as I am concerned, a lecture about western art will be given in the coming interchange activity in summer vacation. I’m writing to give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture.
As a music lover, I’m greatly fond of classic music, therefore I would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced.
I believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art. Last but not least, I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and hope you a wonderful trip to our school.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
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