Topic:
some working parents believe children centres can provide best care for children, while others think of other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Introduction:
Nowadays, one of the concerns for working parents is children's growth education. Parents often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question whether they should send their kids to children centres or ask their relatives to take care of them. Personally speaking , encouraging children to grow up under the care of their grandparents is a superior choice although children' centre sometimes can have a auxiliary role to play.
phrase
the striking advantage of inspiring grandparents too…………
kids who are in formative years
merit [ˈmerɪt]
concede 承认;退让 [kənˈsi:d]
I have to concede that daycare center still enjoys some merits in helping kids grow up smoothly and healthily.……………………Nonetheless, as for childcare centre, ……………
points:
grandparents
in most cases(在大多数情况下), show more enthusiasm for their children and provide more
considerable
are spoiled lead to a undisciplined life. 被宠坏的
weak in physical strength
nursing centre
well-equipped with facilities
well-trained and professional
feel a sense of isolation
conclusion:
Both …… and…… have a indispensable role in cultivating a ……
assume responsibility of taking care of children
auxiliary [ɔ:gˈzɪliəri] 辅助的; 备用的
has an auxiliary role to play 可以发挥辅助性的作用
strike [straɪk] 罢工
**striking [ˈstraɪkɪŋ] 引人注目的; 显著的; 容貌出众的; **
formative [ˈfɔ:mətɪv] 形成的; 造型的 构词要素
incentive n. 动机; 诱因; 刺激 adj n
intense 热情的,强烈的,紧张的
discipline[ˈdɪsəplɪn]
desirable 可取的; 令人满意的; 值得拥有的
indispensable 不可缺少的;绝对必要的;
非必需的[dɪˈspensəbl]
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