复习:
1.According to their use, sentenses are divided into declarative, interrogative, imperative and exclamatory.
陈述句、疑问句、祈使句、感叹句
2.According to their structure, sentenses are divided into simple, compound, complex and compound-complex.
简单句、并列句、复合句、并列复合句
3.From a rhetorical point of view, sentences are loose sentence, periodic sentence and balanced sentence.
松散句、掉尾句、平衡句
句子复习
My father loves mountain climbing and he is a laywer.
This sentence is not effective.
and 前后的两个句子的逻辑关联性较差。违反了句子有效性的第一个标准统一性和完整性。与主旨不是那么密切相关的内容，不应该包含在句子里面。
Revised:
My father is a lawyer and he is very busy. But he loves mountain climbing in his spare time.
A Dream of Red Mansions is The best-known novel.
It cannot express a very complete idea in itself.
Revised:
A Dream of Red Mansions is one of the best-known classical novels in China
ºHow to write effective sentences:
∴Unity
∴Coherence
∴Emphasis
∴Conciseness
ºUnity:
Is of great importance for a sentence.
A unified sentence must express a complete thought.
On the one hand, those, which are not closely related to the main idea should not be included in a sentence; on the other hand, a sentence should not express a thought that is not complete by itself.
principles
principles
ºCoherence
:means clear on the reasonable connection between parts.
A sentence is coherent when its words or parts are properly connected and their relationships are mistakablely clear.
Therefore, the elements within a sentence should be coherently and logically arranged.
练习练习
Reserved:
1.The lost child was finally found wondering in a farmer's frozen field.
2.To get ready for the trip, she put all the things she needed into a suitcase.
3.This firm, in addition to the one set up two decade ago is facing with difficult situation.
4.He was knocked down, but he was not hurt seriously.
经常会出现的一些错误类型
⊙修饰语的悬垂或修饰语的错位
⊙由于前后的不一致而出现的问题
⊙由于代词使用不当而造成的问题
⊙不正确地使用人称 语态 时态等
⊙不恰当地使用平行结构
具体句子
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