题目要求

Knowledge and Diploma

  1、目前，在社会上有这样的一种说法，文凭越高越吃香；

  2、而有人些人则认为文凭不等于知识；

  3、你的观点

我们先来看看要求

是有两种看法，需要指出这两种看法，在指出后 你的看法

我们看看范文如何写的

Knowledge and Diploma

  With the development of the society, more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a higher diploma. It is believed that high diploma equals to high ability and profound knowledge. Most companies are inclined to hire the people with higher diploma. It seems that having high diploma means a better future.

  However, is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge? Some people do not agree this. They claim that ability or knowledge means more than diploma. Take Bill Gates, the head of the Microsoft, for example, he does not have an MBA degree which is believed to play a vital role in the success in commercial life. Furthermore, Sam Walton of Wal-Mart Stores Inc. does not have one eithere, but they are among the most successful man in the commercial world.

  In my opinion, diploma is not equal to knowledge. A diploma is a piece of paper which establishes your education degree. But your true ability and the real knowledge come from your hard work and endowment. If you got a diploma by dishonest behavior, no matter how high it is, it stands for nothing.

这里我们是学习范文的写作，

首先   我们来看看开头如何写

我们可以看到这个常用句式，一般讲前后对比，科技，生活习惯和观念的前后对比

  With the development of the society

然后，描述一下现在的社会现象，现在不是很多人去考研究生吗？这就联系到了学识和学位，。第一句是套句，第二句需要我们自发的联系学位和学识可现今情况，指出存在这么一种现象

 more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a higher diploma.

接得。是经典的句型了

. It is believed that high diploma equals to high ability and profound knowledge.

既然我们采取了这种写法，那么我们的思路是第一段引出加肯定学历的重要性，第二段是用however肯定知识能力，第三段是和稀泥两个都说一下

这里句型It is believed that.......是常用句型

接得看中间如何写

中间如何写不重要？随他吧。我们只要学到就行，

中间开头值得学习，在我们想不出还能写什么的时候，多写一些废话

  However, is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge?

however做了一个转折，然后用一个设问句 is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge?

和必不可少的Some people do not agree this来写。我觉得这个模式可以套很多范文

中间所举的例子只要意识到了就行

最后结尾

同样是必不可少的in my opinion,在这里我们应该用容易的常用的，能得个及格就行了

In my opinion

然后开启废话 不过这个equal我们有可能想不到，可以用"Diploma does not necessarily signify knowledge."

diploma is not equal to knowledge.

这句就相当于我们表达了观点。题目中问你的观点是什么，那么一定要有你的观点。而不是两者都取或都不取

关于这篇文章优点之处

上述范文具有以下优点：

1. **结构清晰**：文章分为引言、论点1、论点2和结论，有助于读者理解作者的思路。

2. **引言引人入胜**：文章通过引言成功引起了读者的兴趣，提出了关于文凭和知识之间关系的问题。

3. **使用例子**：作者通过引用比尔·盖茨和山姆·沃尔顿等成功人士的案例来支持自己的论点，这增强了说服力。

4. **观点明确**：作者在结论中明确表达了自己的观点，强调了文凭和知识之间的区别，并提到了不诚实获取文凭的问题。

5. **语言准确**：文章中的词汇和语法使用准确，使文章更加流畅和易读。

这篇文章结尾的

A diploma is a piece of paper which establishes your education degree. But your true ability and the real knowledge come from your hard work and endowment. If you got a diploma by dishonest behavior, no matter how high it is, it stands for nothing.

相当于升华主题了，我学不来

好的，总结一下我能学到的东西吧

1 这是一篇观点相对型文章类型

2，以下句式可经常练习套用

  With the development of the society

 more and more people enroll in the postgraduate examination for getting a higher diploma.

. It is believed that high diploma equals to high ability and profound knowledge.

 However, is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge?

In my opinion

3，文章应有自己的逻辑结构，下次考试看到这个类型文章时应有帮助