Task 1 of IELTS on March10. 2018
题目:
The chart below shows the depth of snow in a particular ski report in Canada in three individual years .(单位应该是毫米，milimeter)
坡姐范文:
The chart provides information about the depth of snow in three consecutive years in Canada.
As is presented in the bar chart , in Nov of year 1 ,only 100 milimeter(mm) depth of snow was found in Canada , followed by a slight increase in the next two months , levelling out at above 150 mm. (这个句子稍微有点长，是由一个主句开始，后面跟了一个被动和一个同位语）An obvious rise happened in Feb when the number suddenly reached to 250mm , more than doubled compared with that in Nov . Then the figure went up gradually and slowly ,rising further close to（继续增加到）300 mm in Apr.
.Initially in year2 , the depth of snow was shown around 150mm in Nov and Dec before experiencing a rapid and dramatic growth ,topping（达到最高的一种高级表达)nearly 400 mm in April . This data was three times as much as that in the first month .
While in the last year in the chart ,it was differnt . The first three months from Nov to Janwitnessed a clear increase(这个句型需要时间来作主语） of snow depth , from approximately 170mm to over 250 mm that is the highest during this year . Interestingly , the next three months saw an opposite dropping trend（同上，也需时间作主语) , declining to the lowest ,at 150mm in Apr .
In conclusion , relatively deeper snow was observed in year 2 in Canada and likewise the month of April .
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