【20200229 - Sunny Hu Forerunner&ZJU&Dreamtown Joint Meeting Feedback】：
一、最印象深刻的情景（不超过3个）：
1、Yu Zhou 娴熟的主持
2、Queenie、Marguerite的发音很好，Queenie的整个Table Topic Speech 轻松自然，与观众的互动性也很好。
3、（GE）Wine和（ah-counter）Bingbing 既高效且精准地分别以PPT和汇总表的形式做了报告，使大家一目了然，很nice。
二、最让我有收获的是（不超过3个）：
1、Stephane演讲时候与观众的问答形式值得借鉴
2、Nina和Paco的点评剖析地很透彻，Leo的语法报告也很到位。
3、有效的Feedback可以帮助他人进行自我评判和对他人的评价，并持续不断地成长。我觉得forerrunner的反馈机制中的提问，也正好体现了这一点，每一个问题都能是很能激发起人们内心的思考，值得我们学习。
三、最能指导我学习成长的规律是（1-2点）：
集思广益
四、有哪些可以改进的？（1-2点）
演讲的时候再熟练一些，同时可提升一下与观众的互动性。
第一次用Zoom，有点生疏，发消息老是发错人。哈哈。下次应该会熟练一些。
五、如果接下来一个月内要做一件事，这件事是：
备稿
六、想要分享的一句话：
引用乔布斯的名言：Stay hungry，Stay foolish ^_^
今晚的演讲没有超时，用时6分20秒
definitely确切地说
anyway 无论如何
right？对不对
that's all 就这样；说完了
time is up 时间到了
can you hear me? 能听得到我说话吗？
indepandent 独立的
superficial 肤浅的
passional 热情的
What do I value ？ 我看重什么？
conquer 征服
别人的Feedback：
Justin‘s evaluation for stone speech：
Thanks for store, you give me a remarkable speech. It's very detail. It's trying to tell something by telling story. When he on the trip on the New Zealand. I think we can relate it ourselves. But for some words, maybe you can make it more accurate, for example, when you're waiting for a bus, you Walk pass , Maybe you can use some simple words, So that our audience can understand quite easily. All in all. I think you are doing great. For one more suggestion, We all can learn from Stephane, he is doing well. His tone is very professional. He's like a professional speaker, I think we can all learn from Stephane. Thank you.
主持人:Yu Zhou
Thank you so much for Justin , That's the first evaluation from Justin to stone speech. Now let's invite to Nina to give her evaluation to Stephane's speech. How about you? Nina? Are you ready?
Nina: Yes, I'm ready
Yu Zhou : Yes , please.
Nina's evaluation for Stephane speech:
Good night, everyone. I think Stephane has made a remarkable speech, I'm very increased by his voice.why , because We chat in the group, I don't know he grow up in France. And after he reads the article. I don't know. He couldn't speak Chinese one years ago. Okay, let's talk about his speech.He used a good structure , we called OBC . Opening、 Body 、Conclusion. In the opening part, His _____ by asking questions. Next , he Connected with an audience , right? And in the body part, He followed by a timeline, yes we can see His clearly line , 15 years ago, he came from France to China to learn major in, And three years ago, he experience in France, And some emotions . One year a half ago, He couldn't speak Chinese and ____. And the last part is conclusion, Don't think what, think Why First. In the beginning , I was confused by his title, The speech title is "think why, No what", I also know his some shining point, because he growing up in France. And also the emotion, he delivered to us some suggestions, And I know his that talk about.he Talk about the feeling of falling down. And I think it's one Challenge for you, Also a Challenge for me. Because in the online meeting, right? Because it's difficult to meet you with eye contact. So for me, is is difficult to find the camera, And also difficult for you , And I hope next time, Maybe we can Some Pretty Online meeting, not camera. Okay, that's all. Thank you.
Wine Evaluation to Lisa:
Hello, everyone. I am very happy to be evaluated to Lisa speech. She has a very clear structure. Because she study with her study during ask her story on her own.____（后面略过）
主持人: Thank you, Winnie. I think you are0very clear structure in your logic. Thank you very much. And next evaluator is Paco, he is evaluation to Sunny's speech. Warnly warmly welcome to Paco.
Because it still noon here, I have three points
The first one, All speeches, she is Only one use power point presentation, Now you don't have to do it, but it's very, very good, That it help some people to understand. Right. Now you don't need to use the PowerPoint, That is very Fashionably , the color , Picture, and the structure, she is clear, Help us understand. To show your joy at the toastmasters. The topic is also very interesting, she made a very humorous, introducing funny pictures, means some joys, such as, If I was the audience, when I was speaking , Will feel that I was speaking Longer within seven minutes . ___ English level , Interactive audience , aslo said is not what you say But how connection with audience. Also truth a your progress
Now it's second second part. You 've do better, One thing is beginning the mention of the presentation, Why did you choose the Topic , But it's good jobs made the Audience for interested , tell the audience. why make do the ___
And some suggestions how to challenges :
In the future, Included audience as well, Similar to Stephane, You can ask some questions. but Something that , Sometimes makes this speech. More across.
So, that's all of my results , Thank you for your presentation.
主持人: Thank you for Paco Awesome evaluation.
语法官:Leo
for Sunny : When I gave a speech / When I deliver speech（ Because speech is not a verb）
时间官:
Stephane in your prepared speech, And Nina in your evaluation use exactly over time, Maybe next time you can speak more time internal. During between speeches and Elevations. And put more time internet internal. So that we warm our time management, want All beyond __. Generally, you did a remarkable job. Thank you.
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