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It is assumed／conceive that multicultural communication brings great advantages for the country, since every culture is unique and has its own peculiar enchantment.
It is not uncommon theses days for young people to suspend their courses for one-year travel or work.
It is not rare to see ……
This viewpoint sounds reasonable, but these two things should not be treated in the same way.
A 乐观：
Although multicultural societies have some some negative issues，I deem that it should embraced with more optimism.
despite the potential risks they pose, they exert more beneficial effects on individuals and society.
As far as i am concerned, the merits of this practice outbalance its possible demerits.
B 悲观：
Although student can benefit a lot from the experience in a gap-year，It's drawbacks cannot be ignored.
结尾
To conclude, having a year traveling or working is, by all means advantageous for students.
In closing,i believe that moving some business to rural areas will bring more advantages. Even though it might bring about some problems, it is still a preferable attempt in the long run.
观点
One prominent advantage is that
Numerous benefits can be gained by inspiring the businesses to run in the remote rural areas.
The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a student who passed directly from high-school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.
With regard to individuals, the exposure to these social network extends opportunities to
In conclusion, it should be borne in mind that educating next generation is a shared obligation for government as well as individuals.
应该牢记，教育下一代是政府和个人共同的义务。
让步段：
Nonetheless, we can never ignore the downside triggered by this policy .
in spite of the fact that has just been mentioned**
enchantment 魅力
downside 缺点
The interaction of diverse cultures shapes the country more alive and fascinating
pose/have an adverse effect on
不同角度：
analyze issue from a different perspective and come up with original suggestions
will pose a threat to the local environment even though it brings about economic incentive.
incentive 动因 刺激
Further ,it is conceived that over-expansion of factories will inevitably trigger environment-related problems
be engaged in
should strive for *a win-win result
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