AD结尾段(30-40)
- conclusion 1
restate position+summarize reasons
In conclusion, I reaffirm my conviction that...in that...and...
不能完全重复第一段内容，可适当改写
- conclusion 2
观点偏、题目中存在选项——表达观点+建议结尾
in conclusion, my view is that...
however, it is recommended that...
特殊题型
- 绝对词
形容词副词的最高级 the most important
概念绝对的形容词 only never every no
*出现绝对词的题推荐写disagree
*第二段作为承认最高级别的一般级别
*正面举例字数不够的话，利用假设或对比进行反面举例
例：salary
A: 工资最重要+其他不那么重要
D: 工资一般重要+其他更重要
- 题目分为两个部分
文章开头段：两个部分都要回应
while I agree that...I do not agree that...
positive or negative
Is this a positive or negative development?
- the proportion of older people is steadily increasing
开头：更大的挑战
body1: 对政府的经济压力
body2: 年轻人的责任压力
body3: 经济衰退
conclusion
advantages outweigh disadvantages
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
- it is better for children to begin learning a foreign at primary school rather than secondary school
开头
body1: 头脑更加容易接受
body2: flexible timetable
body3: disadvantages 教学质量，对初中的sequent learning
conclusion
*优点和缺点都要提到，哪个多就多加一段
*对比举例 unlike adolescents
评分标准
- task response：时间和字数，完全回应题目的问题
- coherence and cohesion：分段、连接
- lexical resource：多样性（同义转换 词性转换 固定搭配）
- grammar range and accuracy：语法正确（时态语态、句意完整）、句型多变（简单复杂句混合、多种语法结构）
coherence:
（1）结构
递进：firstly - in addition/what's more - more importantly
平行：firstly - secondly - finally
重要递减：primarily - apart from that - at last
（2）
thesis
evidence：原因/结果、代词、which非限定从
example
lexical：
get - obtain, gain, acquire
know - be informed about, have a good understanding of
vocabulary
facilitate
inhibit
self-consciousness
exposure
innate
harness
Argument
- 审题：
（1）抓出题目中讨论的话题
（2）两方说法
（3）根据两方说法需要回答什么
（4）自己的看法
- Topic: medical costs
A: free for everyone / B: paid by individuals
Discussion
双方观点不是完全矛盾的情况下，选择两方观点的结和
- 结构
开头段：引出话题+表达看法
body1: 讨论A
body2: 讨论B（两段都要客观讨论，没有I, we, you, 而是they）
结尾段：我的看法
字数：40+100+100+50
- 提纲
-
healthcare and education: government? citizens?
example
Introduction
- paraphrase the topic
- my opinion
(1)paraphrase
方式1:换句子结构
some people argue for...claiming that...while others show their preference for...
方式2:抓主题 背景化
（主语从句）...draws the attention of the public. Some claim that...while others show their preference for...
(2)表达自己的观点
in my opinion...
my view is that...
I contend that...
alternative
implement
augment 增加
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