立志半年内雅思走上8777主攻写作的读书笔记
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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Introduction
- topic: help the whole world
- answer: completely disagree
Main 1
- people in the other side of the planet deserve to be saved;
- firstly, people outside of our country need help; any possibility can give them hope to survive in extreme circumstances;
- secondly, a huge amount of individuals' contribution will make a magnificent difference;
- finally, the same planet; think for human beings' living;
Main 2
- locking the kindness only within a country does no good for development;
- kids from different country cannot go to the same school; hard to learn different languages;
- people with various background are treated differently; lose social harmony;
- no global information sharing;
Conclusion
- short sighted to only look after people around or within the same country
Here's what Simon writes about Help
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are not problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.
On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.
At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.
In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.
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Source: 雅思考官9分范文合集-雅思前考官Simon
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