雅思G类写作 - Opinion - Hobbies

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Introduction

• It is sometimes argued that..
• I completely disagree with the point of view.

Main paragraph 1

• difficult ones bring frustration;
• a lot of time spent; piano requires practice;
• break normal life;
• cannot be understood by majority, such as astronomy;

Main paragraph 2

• easy ones bring more happiness;
• easy to start and get sense of achievement;
• won't affact work;
• still time to look after family

Conclusion

• In conclusion...

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Here's Simon's writing

Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.

On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment, it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to swim at my local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures without knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.

On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level of performance because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater.

In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.

Notes

Source: 雅思考官9分范文合集-雅思前考官Simon