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今天开始看新书了，这一本书的作者琼·平卡姆女士给了我们一次集中“赏析”中式英语的机会。

中式英语之鉴（1）13W13

中式英语，因其半英半汉、不英不汉，被作者戏称为“具有汉语特色的英语“。这样的英语每天都在我们中间出现，见于街头的广告词，见于我们的英语报刊，见于政府报告的英译文本。

全书由三部分组成，第一部分：多余的词，分为多余的名词和动词、多余的修饰语、同义堆叠、重复指称等类。

第二部分为句子结构，从名词肿胀症、代词与先行词、短语和子句的位置，垂悬成分，平行结构、逻辑连词六个方面.

第三部分是补充的例子和练习。

Part one第一部分：

好的文章应该是简洁的，句子中无任何用处的单词应该去掉。这些多余的词不是单独出现，而会连同冠词，介词一起出现。

1.第一种名词比较好辨认出来，这类词的含义已经在句子其他成分出现。

❎to accelerate the pace of economic reform

✅to accelerate economic reform

[to accelerate =to increase the pace of]

❎there have been good harvests in agriculture

✅there have been good harvests

[harvest implies agriculture:there are no harvests in industry]

❎living standards for the people in both urban and rural areas continued to rise

✅living standards in both urban and rural areas continued to rise

[the notion of living standards applies only to people]

（living standard只能指人）

❎these hardships are temporary in nature

✅these hardships are temporary

[any adjective describes the nature or character of the noun it modifies]

❎the development of our economy in the future will,to a large extent,depent on...

✅the development of our economy will depend on a large extent on...

[will就包含了in the future的意思】

第二类名词不太好辨认，动名词

这些词对句意无帮助，去掉不会改变句意，相反更佳简洁

❎it is essential to strengthen the building of national defense

✅it is essential to strengthen national defense

第三类 种类名词

中式英语中跟常见，比如a serious mistake in the work of planning

这里是说planning是work的一种，这是已知的事情，就像强调红旗是红的一样

❎promoting the cause of peaceful reunification

✅promoting peaceful reunification

❎reform in the sphere of the economy

✅reform in the economy

❎to ensure a relationship of close cooperation between

✅to ensure close cooperation between

❎we must oppose the practice of extravagance

✅we must oppose extravagance

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