翻译：
He and she went in the car near the house together,went straight to the train station,took the box (the box was very big,was heavy ),brought it home together.
How can he make the decision quickly?For half a month, he hesitated all the time, and didn't send a post card.
He was surprised by it. He did it that wasn't his principle. He had divorced ten years with his first wife. He was happy when he divorced, like other people happy. Then he knew he nationally didn't live with one woman,Whoever this woman was, he also knew only single, he had free really. Thus he tried his best to design a lifestyle. No woman couldn't live in his house and took box forever. This is the reason why he had one sofa. Though this sofa was quite wide, he always said to lovers that he didn't sleep with other women on the bed, midnight later, he always drove to send them back. And, when Teleisha lived in his home with flue firstly, he didn't sleep with her. First night, he lied a large bench chair.
《了不起的姐姐》
But this time, he was asleep on his side.When he woke, he found that Teleisha was asleep, was grabing his hand. Were they hand in hand all night?It was believe difficult.
She was breathing heavily in her dream, she grabed his hand(very tight, he didn't get ride of her.), Heavy luggage was placed nearby.
He didn't dare to take his hand,worrying about awaking by him. He turned his body carefully, then looked at her slowly.
总结：在翻译过程中有很多词汇是陌生的，一部分我查了翻译，一部分是用自己的语言转译，用近义词翻译。在批改过程中，我看到有很多语法错误，有一些是简单的，基本的，我意识到了多练习的重要性，还要反省避免一次次踩坑。
为了让自己意识到错误，我把它们按照批改的标注，然后对照，以便回顾的时候清晰明了，最后用批注功能改正，这样，就可以泾渭分明啦。
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