slow down

I have spend 7 days to write a paper, which I was satisfied with. When I finished it I was so happy ,I would have a trip I told myself. I sent it to my teacher yesterday,who would go over the thesis. I was a little afraid , aftrr all he is a rigorous man.

I received his write back this morning and he gave me a lot of amendments. At first, l felt sad because I needed to do it again, and my mind was constantly recalled "my trip, my trip......". I wanted to cry but I know it was useless. So I read the advise one more time. I suddenly was enlightened by one sentence---take your time, don't be hurry to submit apiece of writing for publication and he blessed me have a funny vaccation.

I know I just want to finnish the work and don't care whether it is a masterpiece or not. I should slow down my step, do my best. Then I can have a chance to be a good writer.