一、总体思路：三段式
第一段：描述图画/表格
第二段：主题-原因-结果-举例-总结
第三段：结论+建议
二、例句
第二段
1、主题句
- The aim of the picture is to illustrate that culture bending is of great significance in our society.
- The author sends a clear message via this drawing that love underlies all parts of the social progress.
- It is manifested in the picture that love is the key not only for the growth of an individual but also for the nation as a whole.
- Rather than scratching the surface of idol worship itself(screen addiction), the picture delves deep into the reasons and consequence behind this phenomenon.
2、原因句
社会原因
- We live in the age when rapid economic development is not only heard over the media but also seen and felt in our daily lives.
- With the prosperity of economy in China and the increase of people's income in recent years, a large number of people are paying more attention to children's education instead of making money.
- Education is one of the key words in our time. Convinced the importance of education, modern countries invest university to get back benefit in the form of a large number of intellectual young people who are potential leaders.
- Ordinary people are more interested in the affection between parents and children, which may have a direct impact on their living standards.
个人原因
- Making constant effort brings a helpful means of the alleviation of financial burden and the improvement of competitiveness and professional ability.
- It is interesting to note that many successful people have some personality traits in common. A optimistic/hardworking/self-disciplined person is able to overcome difficulties and cooperate with others to achieve success.
- One advantage of purchasing homemade car is that we can save a great deal of tax. Meanwhile, we must recognize the fact that saving money is not the only determinant of the jump of Chinese car's sales volume.
3、结果句
- Students who make the wrong choice could be faced with gloomy career prospects, or end up wasting their time and money.
- The development of Internet can revolutionize the scientific level of a country, means of communication and quality of life for people.
Consequently, people with self-disciplined can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. - Once this idea takes root in the heart of every citizen, the road ahead will be lit with dreams and hopes.
- As a result , it would not be exaggerating to say that we will make the world a more harmonious place.
- If there is a growing number of people who lack the quality of learning from different culture, the world will be a worse place.
4、举例句
- There are many people who lack optimism which is important because it has a direct bearing on our living quality. Helen Keller, the famous author and educator who was blind and deaf, once said optimism is the faith that leads to achievement. Nothing can be done without hope and confidence. In contrast, it is hard for pessimistic people to deal with pressure and difficulties.
- Just like Tu Youyou, her practice of scientific research, made her not only be admired by the world, but also worth learning by our college students.
- Legendary Nike founder and CEO Phil Knight, who started his company with only 2000 dollars, is a fitting example. Three times was his company facing bankruptcy, three times did he lead the company out of darkness. "Have faith in yourself. More importantly, have faith in faith."
5、总结句
- We have to admit that reading plays a role in our lives as a source of information, experiences, entertainment and relaxation.
- Living in cities can make the most of your time and chance.
- Living in cities is an effective way to broaden horizons, acquire knowledge, increase income and strengthen competitiveness.
- Addiction to mobile phone makes people weary of other important things and discourages them to learn more knowledge.
第三段
措施：
Fortunately, the government and more and more people are aware of the significance of environmental protection. Take waste sorting, the policy that the government spares no effort in implementing, for example. From my perspective, it is imperative for us to support it and strictly abide by the classification system. Participation deriving from individual citizens plays an indispensable role in safeguarding the natural environment.
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