题目要求

Directions: Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to attend a vocational college or a university, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 

假设你被要求就是否上职业学院或大学给出建议，写一篇文章来陈述你的观点。

这里可我们前面写的可以说是有相同之处了

    Due to the shortage of technicians in society, various vocational colleges are set up in recent years. Faced with the choice of going to a university or a vocational college, students who have striven for national college entrance examination, hold different views. Some students choose university, believing that universities are the standard learning places, while others deem that vocational colleges are better for their emphasis on the development of professional skills. 

  As far as I am concerned, to choose a university or a vocational college depends on various factors. First of all, you should take your marks into consideration because the enrollment mark for attending universities is relatively higher. Second, you should confirm what you really like, because love is a better teacher than duty. If you are interested in something, you are more likely to succeed and have a strong sense of satisfaction. At last, you should consider your career orientation. You should decide what to do after graduation, to get further education or to work. If you are the former one, attending a university is a good choice.   

From what I have mentioned above, you should make a choice combining with your interests and characters. Besides, no matter where you are, you will make an achievement as long as you make an earnest effort on it.

  2、对此你的看法是…

那么这里的不同之处就是你要把上大学和职业学校的好处都写上来，然后in your opinion

我们来看看这的开头怎么写，先来描述现象，with the development of ，

  Due to the shortage of technicians in society, various vocational colleges are set up in recent years. Faced with the choice of going to a university or a vocational college, students who have striven for national college entrance examination, hold different views. Some students choose university, believing that universities are the standard learning places, while others deem that vocational colleges are better for their emphasis on the development of professional skills.

Faced with the choice of going to a university or a vocational college,

面对的是去职业学校还是大学，每个人的选择都不同，用some student ，other student的句型回答

然后我的回答是不能太片面，要有多方面考虑，因人而已

    As far as I am concerned, to choose a university or a vocational college depends on various factors

. First of all, you should take your marks into consideration because the enrollment mark for attending universities is relatively higher. 

Second, you should confirm what you really like, because love is a better teacher than duty. If you are interested in something, you are more likely to succeed and have a strong sense of satisfaction. 

At last, you should consider your career orientation. You should decide what to do after graduation, to get further education or to work. If you are the former one, attending a university is a good choice.

结尾

From what I have mentioned above, you should make a choice combining with your interests and characters. Besides, no matter where you are, you will make an achievement as long as you make an earnest effort on it.

用all in all句型也可以，在重复因人为宜，再用, no matter where you are, you will make an achievement as long as you make an earnest effort on it.打个鸡血

学到了

要我对某件事提意见的话，有关于青年学生拼搏精神不够，那就死命赞同，有这个让我对某一个事或一个现象讨论，我就模棱两可

先with the shortage of the technicans in sociey ，职业学校成立了许多，再用有的人选择那个，因为什么，有的人那个，又因为什么，再用as far as i am concerned 就我而知，选择院校需要多方面，firest ,second third,最后，all in all ，in conclusion再总结，这里有个句子好的

From what I have mentioned above, 

All mentioned above tell us that ，you should combing withj ..... 最后也能what's more no mattrt where you are ,you will make an achievement as long as you make an earnest effort on it.