关于爱好hobbies
As an outgoing junior school student , I have many hobbies , such as drawing, traveling ,playing chess, watching TV, taking photos and reading books. 作为一个性格开朗的初中生，我有许多爱好，例如画画、旅行、下棋、看电视、摄影和读书。(使用了as作为和such as列举）
Among these hobbies，I like reading best. 其中，我最喜欢阅读。
As is known to all, reading can enrich our knowledge and experience. 众所周知，阅读可以丰富我们的知识和阅历（as is known to all众所周知；enrich使丰富）
In my spare time, I like to read a book and enjoy a beautiful poem or a wonderful story. 在我的业余时间，我喜欢读一本书，欣赏一首美妙的诗歌或者一个精彩的故事（in my spare time在我的业余时间）
My Chinese teacher told me that the more books I read, the more progress I would make.我的语文老师告诉我，我读书越多，我的进步就会越大。（that引导宾语从句；the more…，the more…是越…就越…句型）
Ｉwill read more books because Ｉ want to be a better girl.我会读更多的书，因为我想成为一个更好的女孩（because引导原因状语从句）
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