Day6
The gentleman in picture seems to be a dignitary in ancient European society. He wears a dark green velvet coat with stand-up collar and tie a white silk scarves. His garment sets him a sense of high grade.
修改：tie→ties
In the warm light, the gentleman`s skin presents gentle luster. His brown short hair is slightly curly which adds the sense of activeness. His face is a little long and it`s pivoted at the midpoint by a high-bridge nose. A close look gives away his day`s growth of beard on his face.
修改：sense→feeling
He is looking at someone siting in his oblique front, eyebrows flying and corralling up lines of forehead winkles. His bright piercing eyes demonstrates his curiosity and concentration, double eyelids set them more friendly. The rising corners of his sipped mouth intimates the curiosity and willingness in the following conversation.
总结：今天看到了群里两位优秀同学的文章~不管是用词还是句式上都有很多可借鉴的地方！要好好积累语料！另外要带着学习的心态去读《绿屋的安妮》
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