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阿雄点评:冯取洽《沁园春》钢笔字练字打卡作业欣赏

阿雄点评:冯取洽《沁园春》钢笔字练字打卡作业欣赏

作者: nonozone | 来源:发表于2021-03-03 10:49 被阅读0次

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    <p><span>上一期的作业题目是</span></p>
    <blockquote>
    <p><span><span><a href="https://www.nonopen.com/tag/%e6%b2%81%e5%9b%ad%e6%98%a5" title="沁园春" target="_blank">沁园春</a></span>/<span><a href="https://www.nonopen.com/tag/%e5%86%af%e5%8f%96%e6%b4%bd" title="冯取洽" target="_blank">冯取洽</a></span> </span></p>
    <p><span>问讯柳溪,溪上柳容,胡为带埃。 </span></p>
    <p><span>叹阳春陡变,孰为披拂,赏音难遇,谁与徘徊。 </span></p>
    <p><span>好在湖山,吾容不辱,寄径垂条岂偶哉。 </span></p>
    <p><span>休摇荡,且深根宁极,免俗人猜。 何妨傍竹依梅。 </span></p>
    <p><span>待青眼春回一笑开。 </span></p>
    <p><span>尽攀丝弄叶,效颦施黛,笼鞯拂帽,藉阴传杯。 </span></p>
    <p><span>未碍飞绵,一高千丈,风力微时稳下来。</span></p>
    <p><span>天难问,便陶门汉苑,一任安排。</span></p>
    </blockquote>
    <p><span>这期的<span><a href="https://www.nonopen.com/tag/%e7%bb%83%e5%ad%97%e6%89%93%e5%8d%a1" title="练字打卡" target="_blank">练字打卡</a></span>由 </span><span><strong><span>阿雄</span></strong></span><span> 老师负责挑选和点评,结果如下:</span></p>
    <p><span>各位书友大家新年好,这是春节之后的第1期作业,由我来当点评嘉宾。说实话,我感觉到压力很大,春节前的两期分别是知止和蔡俊东两位老师点评的,他们都非常专业,点评的非常到位。这一期的佳作非常多,可能是大家在春节期间有时间认真写的原因吧,而且还有好几位新面孔。这次挑选了22幅作业,依次给予点评意见,挑选作品的先后顺序按照投稿时间的先后,不代表水平的高低。</span></p>
    <h2><span>1</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-01-194d55.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-01-194d55.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-01" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/72a8dbe2280c4218.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-01-194d55.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-01"></span></p>
    <p><span>知止老师这幅楷书作品采用的是参赛作品纸,淡雅清新,整幅作品章法布局合理,楷书以柳体为基调,融入魏碑和行书笔意,法度森严而不失灵动,印章大小位置恰当,是一幅货真价实的精品,彰显深厚的书法功力,而且知止老师把交作业当做参赛,这种严谨认真的态度值得大家学习。</span></p>
    <h2><span>2</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-02-b4c7fa.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-02-b4c7fa.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-02" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/1052dbc8095a683d.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-02-b4c7fa.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-02"></span></p>
    <p><span>剑平的这幅行书采用明八行信笺书写,取法圣教序,加入少量草书,笔力遒劲,点划精到。</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:整幅作品章法有点满,字的大小缺乏变化,第1个“问”字写成了“门”字。</span></p>
    <h2><span>3</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-03-2d2a68.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-03-2d2a68.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-03" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/a343f849c1164020.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-03-2d2a68.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-03"></span></p>
    <p><span>盏素书友这幅作品应是赵孟頫笔意,古意盎然,赏心悦目,学习书法必须临古,与古为徒,方为正道。</span></p>
    <p><span>说句题外话:字如其人,我猜这位书者应是一位清秀的女性。</span></p>
    <h2><span>4</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-04-628a7d.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-04-628a7d.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-04" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/51208c927a3cedf2.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-04-628a7d.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-04"></span></p>
    <p><span>润林的行书,简体竖写,结体规范,运笔流畅,行气十足,落落大方。不知道是不是没写繁体字的原因,整幅作品感觉缺少一点古意。</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:落款应整体提高一些,留出印章的位置。</span></p>
    <h2><span>5</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-05-46a0df.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-05-46a0df.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-05" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/c213f39b907f366d.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-05-46a0df.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-05"></span></p>
    <p><span>一止这副楷书,取法晋人小楷,结体古朴高雅,笔划精致,如果不用格子纸书写,可能效果会更好。</span></p>
    <h2><span>6</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-06-d94bd2.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-06-d94bd2.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-06" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/e1ad7b22c7c4d456.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-06-d94bd2.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-06"></span></p>
    <p><span>俊东的行草书,看似漫不经心,实则取法高古,结体险中求胜,点画顾盼生姿,如江湖侠士自由行走,放荡不羁不落俗套,细细品味如饮甘露。</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:用纸太不讲究。</span></p>
    <h2><span>7</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-07-09bd16.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-07-09bd16.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-07" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/1019ed209c3cbb4d.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-07-09bd16.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-07"></span></p>
    <p><span>这幅行书作品行笔流畅,结体老到,不纠结局部细节,整体行气如行云流水,功力深厚!</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:落款没有署名。</span></p>
    <h2><span>8</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-08-8a452b.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-08-8a452b.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-08" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/db0e703c9d7b8179.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-08-8a452b.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-08"></span></p>
    <p><span>左边的钢笔吸引眼球,右边的字虽然不太成熟,但认真端正的态度值得鼓励。</span></p>
    <h2><span>9</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-09-3384d5.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-09-3384d5.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-09" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/2e613118de18c11b.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-09-3384d5.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-09"></span></p>
    <p><span>李杰的行书取法米芾,米味甚浓,潇洒飘逸,整幅作品一气合成。</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:作品纸左边多出两行,显得左轻右重。</span></p>
    <h2><span>10</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-10-74031e.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-10-74031e.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-10" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/4bd3a9e19f2b8542.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-10-74031e.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-10"></span></p>
    <p><span>立刚这幅楷书,把作品放大后看,更有看头,每一个笔画都非常精美,结体却又非常灵动,显示扎实的楷书功底。</span></p>
    <h2><span>11</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-11-9e7747.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-11-9e7747.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-11" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/6b2f8f48ed08e9ee.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-11-9e7747.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-11"></span></p>
    <p><span>寒江的米芾行书已经是炉火纯青,作品纸古朴养眼,章法疏密有致,用笔浓淡、字组运用、牵丝映带、错落摆动,行书作品的这几大元素,在这幅作品里表现得淋漓尽致!“开”字的那一笔长线,让整幅作品更为生动,几枚小印章的点缀,恰到好处,堪称精品!</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:写的比我好。</span></p>
    <h2><span>12</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-12-aad543.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-12-aad543.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-12" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/b25a0e5d86c829c3.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-12-aad543.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-12"></span></p>
    <p><span>光雷的隶书作品,选纸考究,章法合理,正文隶书取法高古,落款行书运笔流畅,印章大小位置得当,整体给人赏心悦目的感觉,难得的上乘之作。 </span></p>
    <h2><span>13</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-13-1e98b2.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-13-1e98b2.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-13" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/a21e51a87a5d2e1e.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-13-1e98b2.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-13"></span></p>
    <p><span>析理的这幅行书,采用斗方形式,章法布局疏朗,行笔潇洒自如,应是临习过米芾法帖。落款内容交代了笔和墨的出处,符合公众号的要求,印章一阴一阳非常讲究。</span></p>
    <h2><span>14</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-14-15f06c.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-14-15f06c.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-14" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/47ff8797a7301509.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-14-15f06c.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-14"></span></p>
    <p><span>鹏途的楷书,章法有行无列,笔画舒展大方,功底还是十分扎实,建议多临古帖,形成自己独特的风格。</span></p>
    <h2><span>15</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-15-7df8a2.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-15-7df8a2.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-15" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/6221f428eefea2ec.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-15-7df8a2.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-15"></span></p>
    <p><span>俏的这幅行书,纸张古朴,章法疏朗,行气十足,潇洒隽秀,功底比较扎实,秀丽笔运用的非常娴熟。</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:起首印过大。</span></p>
    <h2><span>16</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-16-96e234.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-16-96e234.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-16" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/d4beb78d0270fce2.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-16-96e234.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-16"></span></p>
    <p><span>传江的草书,颇具大家风范,技法娴熟,潇洒飘逸,一气呵成,若江南才子风流倜傥。</span></p>
    <h2><span>17</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-17-640abb.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-17-640abb.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-17" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/79a2f18ee8da584b.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-17-640abb.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-17"></span></p>
    <p><span>苗青的草书,用纸考究,章法新颖,草法娴熟,用印若画龙点珠,整幅作品极其生动,吸引眼球,我想国展大奖作品大概也就这般模样吧。</span></p>
    <h2><span>18</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-18-91e237.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-18-91e237.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-18" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/56d14feeae8672ab.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-18-91e237.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-18"></span></p>
    <p><span>王胜的行草,采用当今流行的拼色作品纸,行草如行云流水,用印锦上添花。</span></p>
    <p><span>不足之处:落款略显局促。</span></p>
    <h2><span>19</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-19-7b783d.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-19-7b783d.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-19" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/bfa9a15b93535385.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-19-7b783d.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-19"></span></p>
    <p><span>这幅隶书作品让人耳目一新,正文隶书取法高古,落款行书错落有致,看落款作者应是新人,欢迎以后多提交作品供大家学习。</span></p>
    <h2><span>20</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-20-9e6b37.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-20-9e6b37.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-20" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/6b3b02ec06adda09.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-20-9e6b37.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-20"></span></p>
    <p><span>这幅行书有启功笔意,功力深厚,浓郁的书卷气扑面而来。以上三位好像都是第一次来公众号投稿的新人,欢迎大家以后每周都来积极参与,互相学习共同提高。</span></p>
    <h2><span>21</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-21-17125f.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-21-17125f.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-21" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/58733b662d165db1.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-21-17125f.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-21"></span><span> 雨辰的楷书,以方格子写成,中规中矩,落落大方,一笔一画显示深厚的功底。雨辰是我的好友,几年来每天坚持写字,从不间断,“勤能补拙”是他的口头禅和座右铭,他的勤奋和坚持值得我们学习。</span></p>
    <h2><span>22</span></h2>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-22-70e98e.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-22-70e98e.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-22" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/a5cc01b828f4c56d.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-22-70e98e.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-22"></span></p>
    <p><span>传统文化也要与时俱进,最后一幅作品是一个叫子瑜的女大学生用苹果笔在平板电脑上面的procreate里写的,写完之后分享到手机qq保存图片就ok了,是不是觉得很洋气?</span></p>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-23-7b1a06.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-23-7b1a06.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-23" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/bbe8ba409df6a908.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-23-7b1a06.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-23"></span></p>
    <p><span>本期开始,设立点评嘉宾作品赏析。邀请知止老师来点评我的作业。知止老师有深厚的文学素养和书法功底,这次点评非常用心,特地手写了评语,现在发出来供大家欣赏。又一幅完美的佳作!</span></p>
    <p><span data-src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-24-0ec72c.jpg"><noscript><img src="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-24-0ec72c.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-24" /></noscript><img src="https://img.haomeiwen.com/i1032/6999a24ee8be3502.png" data-original="https://cdn.nonopen.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/03/钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-24-0ec72c.jpg" alt="钢笔爱好者练字打卡20210302-24"></span></p>
    <p><span>知止老师手写评语的释文: </span></p>
    <p><span>荆楚大地自古多才士,今世书坛盖多。占主任乃中医教授,又沈研翰墨几十载,深得中华文明之天人合一,阴阳辩证之法。可谓笔墨未到,气韵先行。观此书墨色浓淡相益,点划粗细相兼,字间左右相呼,上下笔意相连。每字如一个个鲜活之生命,或飞蝉,或游鱼,或墨梅,亦或春之柳绿摇曳,归燕扑翅。字之所至,情之所至。整幅作品格调高雅,流畅华美,文人之风跃然纸间,实乃上乘之书。 知止恭评! </span></p>
    <p><span>本期题目:</span></p>
    <blockquote><p><span>水龙吟/姜夔 </span></p>
    <p><span>夜深客子移舟处,两两沙禽惊起。 </span> <span>红衣入桨,青灯摇浪,微凉意思。 </span> <span>把酒临风,不思归去,有如此水。 </span> <span>况茂林游倦,长干望久,芳心事、箫声里。 </span> <span>屈指归期尚未。 </span> <span>鹊南飞、有人应喜。 </span> <span>画栏桂子,留香小待,提携影底。 </span> <span>我已情多,十年幽梦,略曾如此。 </span> <span>甚谢郎、也恨飘零,解道月明千里。</span></p>
    </blockquote>
    <p><span>再说一下每期作业的提交方式:大家关注公众号【钢笔爱好者】然后点击下方菜单【<span><a href="https://www.nonopen.com/tag/%e9%92%a2%e7%ac%94%e4%b9%a6%e6%b3%95" title="钢笔书法" target="_blank">钢笔书法</a></span>】>>【每周一篇练字打卡】提交即可。注意,每期的作业截至到下周一下午6点,再次提醒,务必要白纸黑字,尽量不用彩墨,且不要添加滤镜等美化效果。并且建议各位 直接在作品上注明自己所使用的钢笔/笔尖/墨水等相关信息以供他人参考。</span></p>
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