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DAY15
作文
1、Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
1、之前,Woven baskets仅在史前Palea附近发现,有可能是在其他地方也有而暂时还没被人发现。文章并没有提供证据证明其他地方没有,即使是能够提供证据证明当今其他地方没有也并不能说明很久以前其他地方没有。
2、我们发现的是现在Woven baskets在史前的Palea附近,但是史前它就在这里吗?也许是在别的地方制作而由于外力比如人或者河流、大海的搬运作用而移动到现在的地方。所以,不能说明它是Palean people制作的。
3、Brim River现在很宽很深并不代表它在以前也很宽很深,所以不能推断Palean people当时只能通过船渡过它。即使它当时确实也是很宽很深,Palean people也可能会有除了坐船的其他的办法来渡过这条河流,比如游泳啊,张健都横渡了英吉利海峡。而且在那发现的也未必一定需要人带过去,也许是它自己顺着河流漂过去的。
4、没有船被发现不代表当时的人没有穿啊,也许是暂时还没有发现,或者船经历了太长时间被腐化了。
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