Some people believe that people do not need to eat meat and everyone should be a vegetarian to have a healty diet. However, I disgree with this view, I think meat give us a diverse diet which is more healthy than only those eat vegetables.
On the one hand,people can not keep alive without vegetables which provide the necessary nutrition for hulman health . To take vitamin as a example, only vegetables and fruits can provide this metrail. It would be lots of problems happened when people are lack of vitamin, such as loss of vison , blood poisoning. So that it is important for us to take a vegeterian diet which meet our body needs and keep us healthy.
On the other hand, people need meet to be taller and stronger. Although vegetables can meet our daily needs, meet give us more engergy which help people grow faster and stronger. Children and teenagers who are in a important stage of growth need protain to keep them bones stout, which meet can provide enough protain for them. Altheletes also need meet to supply enough energy to keep them in a better status so that they can make good grades in competitions.If people just eat vegatables, they would be smaller and slimmer. Eating meat is a kind of people's original ability and parents want to their children grow stronger and are more anti-virus, they should probably let their chirldren eat more meet.
In conclusion, people need to eat meat to keep healthy in order to confront with the difficult environment.
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Some people believe that people do not need to eat meat and everyone should be a vegetarian to have a healthy diet. However, I disagree with this view, I think meat gives us a diverse diet which is more healthy than only those who eat vegetables.
On the one hand, people can not keep alive without vegetables which provide the necessary nutrition for human health. To take vitamins as an example, only vegetables and fruits can provide this material. It would be lots of problems happened when people are lack vitamins, such as loss of vision, blood poisoning. So that, it is important to take a vegetarian diet which meets our body's needs and keeps us healthy.
On the other hand, people need meat to grow taller and stronger. Although vegetables can meet our daily needs, meat gives us more energy which helps people grow faster and stronger. Children and teenagers who are in an important stage of growth need protein to keep their bones stout, which meat can provide enough protein for them. Athletes also need meat to supply enough energy to keep them in a better status so that they can make good grades in competitions. If people just eat vegetables, they would be smaller and slimmer. Eating meat is a kind of people's original ability and parents who want to their children grow stronger and are more anti-virus, they should probably let their children eat more meat.
In conclusion, people need to eat meat to keep healthy to confront the difficult environment.
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