任何英文考试,都应该细致研究官方给出的范文。
为什么要细致研究雅思官方范文?
1. 权威
2. 可以帮助我们真正理解雅思写作平分标准
3. 可以临摹考官范文,达到理想的写作分数(很多材料比雅思官方范文写得好,比如新概念、经济学人,但也有其值得学习的地方,比如临摹一些句式)
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如何细致研究?
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对于一篇200-300字的文章,花十来个小时研究都不过分,关键是每一篇文章都要坚持这么去做。
需要研究的点:
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高频表达包括:单词,词组,语块(一些表达在词典中查不到,但是母语人士会很自然地用出来)
通过学习“表达”来记忆单词、记忆搭配,而不是单纯地背单词。
常用句型应记牢,以节约时间。考试时应该在审题和观点展开方面多花时间思考。很多人得不到高分的原因是想不出精彩的观点。
考官范文需要注意的地方:
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注意篇幅,不要过长,写的多错的也多。
怎样研究考生范文和考官评语?
《剑桥雅思真题》
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雅思大作文经典题型解法(1)
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优劣势的比较
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思考:你会怎么安排文章的结构?
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交代了背景,客观的描述及概括。没有提出观点。
Justin 建议:涉及到给观点立场的作文,开头段就给出自己的观点。
原文改写:
原文:
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Argument: a reason or set of reasons given in support of an idea, action or theory.
in favor of =in support of
Pick up: to acquire by studying or experience
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favor/champion 参考每日一词
edge 参考每日一词
谓语动词 argue:give reasons or cite evidence in support of an idea, action, or theory, typically with the aim of persuading others to share one's view.
over: above or higher something, without touching it.
in:concerning sth 关于;在……方面
acquire:to gain knowledge or learn a skill
第二句的clearly修饰have。程度副词,放在所修饰词前面。
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advocate: a person who supports or speaks in favour of sb or of a public plan or action.
master: learn/understand
ease: lack of difficult
expose to:使处于……作用(或影响)之下
outdo sb/sth: to more better than sb else
第二句开头应是Supporters。
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第一句是什么语法结构?
promoter:a person who tries to persuade others about the value or importance of sth
proponent: a person who supports an idea or course of action.
translate into sth: to change sth, or to be changed, into a different form
critical: important. Extremely important because a future situation will be affected by it.
instrumental in sth: important in making sth happen
mastery of sth: great knowledge about or understand of a particular thing.
advantageous: helpful and likely to make you successful
每一页的主语不一样。更建议第一页的主语。
建议:
1. 挑战固有的认知。尽可能使用英英词典
2. 把“每日一词”和“每周一段”当成一个project来进行学习,而不是5分钟10分钟随便写个句子出来。
3. 写作前,先过一遍“每日一词”list。
4. 破解单调表达
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