又到每周练笔的时候了,今天我们写的看图写话不难,三个小朋友在美好的春日里放风筝。首先和孩子们讲要怎么写,今日的重点是教孩子们如何修改自己的写话。我拿了一个孩子的写话放在展台上,教他们如何修改,还看了两个小组孩子的写话并给他们提出了修改意见。我告诉孩子们,写完后一定要认真读几遍,语句是否通顺,标点符号标正确了没有?“的得地”用对了没有?批阅作业的时候,发现还是有效果的。写话没有错误的孩子越来越多了!二年级的写话不要求写得有多生动多具体,但一定要语言流畅,无书写错误。这次要特别表扬晨滔、楠芯、贺麟和瑜瑶,他们态度认真,写话有很大的进步,为他们的进步点赞!不多说了,快去瞧瞧孩子们的大作吧!
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