Day-3 follow-up emails

Hi dear Mr. Eric:
It was a pleasure meeting you the other day and discussing the XXX position at your company. After speaking with you and the group, I firmly believe I would be a perfect candidate for this position.
Considering the limitation of the interview time, you might not have a whole picture of me, including the spirits of teamwork and the skills of quick learning. In addition to my enthusiasm for performance well, I would bring my conscious and responsible attitude towards work.
I'm very interseted in working for your company and look forward to hearing from your decision. Please feel free to contact me at any time if futher infromation is needed.
Again, my phone is *******.
Best regards.
Steve.
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Hi dear, Mr. Eric:
It was a pleasure meeting you the other day and discussing the XXX position at your company. After speaking with you and the group, I firmly believe I would be a perfect candidate for this position.
Considering the limitation of the interview time, I might not show a whole picture of myself to you, including quick learning, adaptability and the spirit of teamwork. In addition to my enthusiasm for performance well, I would bring my conscious and responsible attitude towards work.
I'm very interseted in working for your company and look forward to hearing from your decision. Please feel free to contact me at any time if futher infromation is needed.
Again, my phone is *******.
Best regards.
Steve.