今日练习短文《金毛寻回犬》,语言组织较零散,需要重新整合。我将其分为简介、饲养、特征、性情四个部分,整理时考虑MECE原则,用的不是很好看了看做到了“有且只有一个家”,与伙伴们想法不同:简介分为品种、来历、智商、身份四个二级分支,饲养分支读短文,看作者就是在表达饲养容易呀,看了伙伴们的作品,没有一个像我这样思考的。性情选取二级关键词友善、热情、讨喜,三个下级分支。特征则从稳固及犬种两方面继续垂直思考。也在尝试小图标的使用,祁老师说要练习右脑图像图形具象化,这样利于给易记忆。
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伙伴们的作业提交都很积极,有的进步非常大。这些作品都有我学习的地方。
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