四级写作预测
【题目内容】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic: Campus Safety. Based on the Chinese outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1. 校园安全十分重要
2. 因此，学校应当…
3. 我们自己应当…
【写作指导】
para 1: introducing the background and importance of campus safety
para 2: listing the responsibility of schools and giving some examples and advices
para 3: listing what students need to do
【优秀范文】
As more and more schools start to enlarge their annual enrollment, schools’ safety level seems to be brought down. School administrations feel hard to control such a huge population, as a result, cases conducted by people both inside and outside the campus happened more frequently. Under such circumstance, campus safety becomes an urgent task for both school administrations and students themselves.
It’s undeniable that schools should carry the great responsibility for students’ personal safety. Most importantly, campus police need to be well trained in order to face some potential danger from the outside world. Moreover, strict campus rule should be established for a more orderly environment. For example, people without official ID cannot enter the gate and dangerous item found by the security should not be allowed to be taken along into the dormitory.
Students should also have the essential consciousness to protect themselves. Credulousness and carelessness are characters they need to avoid, and some technics of self-defense is always useful for teenagers especially girls.
【好词好句】
enlarge 扩大；放大；详述
enrollment 登记,注册,入伍,入会
administrations 实行, 执行, 管理, 经营, 支配
urgent 紧急的；急迫的
undeniable 无可争辩的;不可否认的;确定无疑的
carry the great responsibility for 为……承担着巨大的责任
potential 潜在的, 有可能的
security 安全；抵押品；证券；保证
consciousness 意识, 观念, 觉悟
credulousness 轻信,老实
1. School administrations feel hard to control such a huge population, as a result, cases conducted by people both inside and outside the campus happened more frequently.
学校管理部门很难控制如此庞大的人口，因此关于校园内外人员安全的案件发生频率更高。
2. Most importantly, campus police need to be well trained in order to face some potential danger from the outside world.
最重要的是，校园警察需要接受良好的培训，以便面对来自外部的潜在危险。
3. Credulousness and carelessness are characters they need to avoid, and some technics of self-defense is always useful for teenagers especially girls.
他们需要避免轻信和粗心，并且对青少年尤其是女孩来说一些自卫技术是十分有用的。
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