第一段
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所有的主语:the French Enlightenment writer and philosopher, a visitor, Voltaire and his principal secretary, his working day, Wagnière, it;
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主语的流动:从the French Enlightenment writer and philosopher,到a visitor,再回到Voltaire,到his working day,再回到Voltaire,到Wagnière,再到 it / 他的routine;
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总结:分总结构,讲述Voltaire的1个习惯(bed)、他一天的routine,最后总结他每天的工作时间和他对自己的routine的看法。全程通过他身边人的角度去描述,以证明这些信息的可靠性。
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名词形式(不同寻常的):
1. He did not eat lunch.(lunch一种界标,抽象概念)
2. Voltaire often continued to give dictation after supper.(dictation一种界标,抽象概念)
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