关注Eric和Justin的公众号很长时间,学到很多英语方面的知识,更重要的是学会不再做伸手党和资料收集者,而是会主动利用互联网获取自己需要的资源,能通过动手查一查解决的问题就不要轻易麻烦别人。两个佩服的人,一起创办了一个走心的社群,推荐的文字又都那样朴实诚恳,不加犹豫就参加了。进来第一天,学到的不是英语而是中文,发言时如何言简意赅一次性表达清楚,提问时如何让人一下就看懂问题并且很乐意帮你解答。嗯,来对地方了!
简单盘点下9月份学习英语的过程。第一次写复盘,我理解这是把造的句子都贴过来放一块?现在看看是什么感觉?觉得这些词陌生还是熟悉?有没有看出哪个用法有问题?现在有没有想到更好的句子可以造?嗯,先贴来吧。
每日一词
1 Too much use of cellphone gradually rippled my eyes.
2.Having dinner with whom counts more than dinner itself.
3 The book we read shapes the way we think.So I think tha quanlity of the book counts more than quantity of the book,a lot of bad reading only crippling our mind
4 I have shifted my sleeping habit from staying up too late to waking up early in the morning,which bringing me better sufficience.
5.Luckin has been increasing favored by coffee drinkers in cities for its freshness ,well-prepared recipes and,most importantly,fast delivery.
6.To cultivate a good habit,100 days suffice.
7.Learing a wonderful word every day have upended my habit of learning English
8.Tough haved departured so many years,their friendship remain deep.
9.What trouble t third-tier cites are weak industrial bases,filmsy social services and a steady brain-drain.
10.When your friend feel sad,listening would help.
每周一段
1.Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of marriage.They often imagine marriage to be very harmonious,you live together,share happiness and sadness and will have a commn kid…yet the other picture of marriage is quite the opposite.You will soon feel bored about each other and have a lot of arguement and complains. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, and whether to marry to another people is purely a personal choice.(仿写)
2.The most determined people do not always choose wisely, no matter how well they are counselled. But it would be wrong to deny everyone the right to assisted death for this reason alone. Competent adults are allowed to make other momentous, irrevocable choices: to undergo a sex change or to have an abortion. People deserve the same control over their own death. Instead of dying in intensive care under bright lights and among strangers, people should be able to end their lives when they are ready, surrounded by those they love.(仿写还没有完成,先贴原文~仿写这个有点难)
关于每日一词的造句,我自己造的句子基本很简单,模仿着给出的例子,换下主语动词场景而已。也想造出更有深度的句子,可是掌握的词汇不足以我去表达出想表达的“深意”。后来,在平台看同学作业的时候,会突然很惊喜的发现,我想要表达的那个场景,别人表达出来了,并且还是词汇我都认识。会心生“哇,原来可以这样表达,妙啊”,不知不觉就学习消化了一些很好的短语、句式。可能同个场景,自己苦苦“翻译”不出来,突然看到“答案”,就会印象深刻,学得很快。而短时间反复看到同个词汇的用法,这个词瞬间成为朋友了。以至于今后在别的地方看到它,会觉得亲切,引起留心和关注。
需要学习的地方:
1 向同学学习:观察同学的作业,会发现他们好认真,造出的句子绝不仅仅是为了完成作业,而会用上丰富的句型,词汇,表达,看起来又精彩又漂亮。感觉有些英语水平本来就非常棒了。也有一些看起来是在巩固他学到的新表达,把每次造句当成练手机会。要把他们句子里那些令我惊叹的语言点学起来,更要把这个对待作业认真的态度学起来,特别是学习从他们交作业的那种看了就很舒服的格式。2 向Justin学习:学习他这种小词大用的方法,品悟他挑选素材话题的绝妙。尝试做语言的敏感者,平时读到精彩的词也用学习“每日一词”的方法掌握下来。
需要改进的地方:
造句之前,有个翻译作业,常不加重视,看完中文马上看英文版本。以后一定要自己先真的翻译出来,再对比参考答案表达的不一样,学习吸收好的表达方式。听线上直播,会为了想节约时间,避免过后还要写复盘笔记,而边听边狂写狂记,导致没跟上思路。感觉成了一个“录音机”而忘记“听讲者”“学习者”身份。以后的线上分享直播,一定要聚精会神在听讲上,沉浸在学习中。听完消化完才写复盘笔记。
觉得有难度的地方:
每周一段的仿写,觉得还是有点难。特别是关于经济学人安乐死那篇,只一小段话,却是一个非常完整绝妙的议论框架。逻辑、词汇、表达,可以学的地方太多了。觉得有难度,主要是能想到的话题本身就不多,要模仿着写上内部逻辑通顺的一段,就更加难了。
解决问题的方案:
有时觉得翻译难,难的更多是中文。太少动手写东西,不管是英文还是中文,所以要把观点以文字呈现就有困难。我想的方法是试着拿考研作文六级作文题目过来思考思考,对照着已经背会的那个框架,写一两篇小小作文。(可以请英语好的朋友帮忙看看,获得反馈)
下一个月的目标:
更认真的完成每日一句的作业,并且亲自动手把每个词查一遍。对着考研作文话题来完成每周一段仿写的作业。能够默写背下来的每周一段。
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