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#21天写作第八天# #修炼专八作文的悲欢#

#21天写作第八天# #修炼专八作文的悲欢#

作者: 1277e3752f08 | 来源:发表于2018-01-30 17:25 被阅读0次

    【学号】I15煎鸡蛋


    【文章】

        Do modernists really trying to embrace their lives liberally, despite of tremendous workloads and internal anxiety keeping on haunting their minds? The author of the above excerpt notes that the truth is hide deeply behind its misleading disguise. He offered some approaches that can authentically slow down our life pace. Firstly, a simple yet revolutionary reform of reduction of encumbrances like backpacks surely leads to slowness. Secondly, fewer intervation of drive-thru service renders more fluent process rather than inflexibility. Third, diurnal rhythms is of great significance to humane way of life, which permits a time-shifting consequence towards your leisure. And finally, the threshold for computers should be raised.

        With economy soared in modern era, people in current society are more exposed to mental stress, hustling and bustling, than ever ever before. It is never easy to take a breath among an avalanche of trifles, let alone enjoy private leisure. To spare one’s time on habits pr traveling obliviously blocked by doomy reality.

        Since some people missed themselves among depressing tide, they are getting increasingly numbed and indifferent to life. Lost in Vanity Fair, all they lose hearts to are wealth and rights, rather than innocent mind and something previously should be pay attention to. Depriving meaning out of life sometimes eludes many of us.

        It’s time to halt our frenetic chase after the meaningless “hyper-power”  in every walk of our life. After all, life is not simply a tally of the gold mines we spend our whole life painstakingly digging, but rather heaven that can be seen simply through a wild flower. For that enlightenment, we need to slow down and take a deep breath in this roaring world.


    【干货】表示“流行 ”的词语或搭配

    ★go viral       

      e.g. Jonah mentioned you both shared a philosophical approach to why things go viral.

    ★all the rage

    e.g. The poem was all the rage then.

    ★prevail

    e.g. We hope that common sense would prevail.

    ★epidemic 

    流行性的; 极为盛行的.


    【写作感想】

    ★第二周写作第一天就发现题型和之前的稍有变化,新的写作结构简直让我猝不及防,只好一边看着范文一边来对照着写。写作思维的僵化可不是一件好事呐。

    ★如果发现有之前收集起来的好的表达方法没有在21天写作计划用上来的话,那得再额外补充训练量了。毕竟任何东西都是用进废退,学习也一样。

    ★翻译是一种很好的输出。


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