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原文:
The Clarkson family lived in the country near Cambridge,about half a mile from the nearest village and about a mile from the river.They had a big,old house with a beautiful garde, a lot of flowers and many old trees.
克拉克森家住在剑桥附近的乡下,离最近的村庄约有半英里路,距离河有1英里左右。他们有幢大而古老带有美丽花园的房子,花园里有许多花和许多古树。
仿写:
- My family lived in the country near Ruijin City, (it is) about 0.05km from the nearest river and about 12km from the train station. I have a old house with large green garden, a lot of plants and many different sorts of birds.
我老家以前住在瑞金市附近的乡下,离最近的河有50米,距火车站有12km。我有栋老房子,房子还带有一个又大又绿意盎然的花园,花园有很多植物和很多不同种类的鸟儿。
- My girlfriend's family live in the town near Hangzhou City, about five miles nearest the river and about ten miles from the mountains. She has a dark, artful handbag with a perfume which good smell.
我女朋友的家现住在杭州市附近的小镇,离最近的河有5英里,距森林有十英里。她有个深色而精致的手提包,包里有瓶很好闻的香水。
- John's family live in the city near a high school, about half a mile from the nearest river and about two miles from the high school. He has a large, old car with four seats, a lot of holes and many cigarettes.
约翰一家现住一所高中附近的城市里,离最近的河有半英里,距高中学校有两英里远。他有一辆大而老旧的汽车,车有四座,座位满是洞和烟头。
- The Smith's family lived in a town near London, about a half mile from the nearest factory and about three miles from the hills. They had a small, old house with beautiful garden, a lot of birds and many old trees.
史密斯一家曾住在伦敦附近的小镇上,离最近的工厂有半英里,距丘陵地带有三英里。他们有座小而老旧的房子,房子带有一个美丽花园,花园有很多鸟和很多古树。
- Lao Wang's family live in the country near Guizhou, about half a mile from the nearest village and about seven miles from the shoping center. They have a big , new house with a large swimming pool, a lot of persons and many shoes.
老王一家现住在贵州一家的乡下,离最近的河有半英里,距购物中心有七英里。他们有栋大而老的房子,房子带有一个大型游泳池,游泳池有很多人,也有很多双鞋子。
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