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11.5雅思写作

11.5雅思写作

作者: 小雨是个姑娘 | 来源:发表于2017-11-05 18:13 被阅读0次

Types of question

  • point of view
  • argument
  • problem
Point of view

some people believe…to what extent do you agree or disagree?
同意或者不同意某人说的话 双方都要考虑
a.背景
b.观点 以some people为标志
c.提问

审题
  1. 区分题目中给出的背景与观点 (根据西方社会主流观点)
  • some people后的才是观点
  • 注意逻辑关系 because后面
  1. 抓出对于话题的正反两方
  2. 根据双方说法需要回答什么
  3. 自己的看法
  • 高中生是否应该参加免费社区服务?
    不一定要完全同意/反对 可倾向于同意/反对
  • the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold?
    A:明星代言、宣传
    D:商品的高销量反映真实需求、个人预算和用户评价
  • getting old is entirely bad 【in the modern world】?
    A:科技发展难以跟上、空巢老人
    D:(benefits)医疗进步、娱乐方式业余生活丰富、社会福利
  • public museums will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computers?
    D:公众博物馆很重要
    储存功能、公众教育、休闲场所
文章结构
  • 单边论证
    开头:改写题目话题和观点+(理由)+看法A
    立论:正面论证A1
    立论:A2
    立论:A3
    结尾:重申看法A+理由
    *第一段、最后30-40,中间主体70
  • 让步论证
    立论1 ➡️驳论段:提出我方不足A+解决/对方合理之处+反驳
提纲
示例

练习:getting old
不用因果、随着,直接陈述事实

Introduction
  1. nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people...negative effects and should be banned?
  • 包含背景(全部是事实)的题目:改写背景+改写题目+表态 (3 sentences)
  • 改写句型:
    主语从句:it is true that.../not uncommonly.../it is interesting to note that...(不要原句的整体重复)
    ➡️It is true that children become target population.../many advertisers produce large quantities of advertisement in a way that attracts children...
  • 转述观点:
    some suggest that...
    it is argued that...
    it has been claimed that...
    ➡️...should not be allowed because of the possible negative effects
  • 表态
    I agree with the opinion.
    I argue against the idea.
    In my opinion,...
    My view is that...
    I contend that...
👆

➡️some claim that...

Practice

produce a marked effect

  • as 引导的原因状语从句(第一段写的理由后面要写到)
  • 可添加相关背景(必须是前提)
  • due to +名词短语(消极)
    thanks to +n.(好)
    because of 强调因果逻辑(中性)
  • 👉Some people say that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past?

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