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11.5雅思写作

11.5雅思写作

作者: 小雨是个姑娘 | 来源:发表于2017-11-05 18:13 被阅读0次

    Types of question

    • point of view
    • argument
    • problem
    Point of view

    some people believe…to what extent do you agree or disagree?
    同意或者不同意某人说的话 双方都要考虑
    a.背景
    b.观点 以some people为标志
    c.提问

    审题
    1. 区分题目中给出的背景与观点 (根据西方社会主流观点)
    • some people后的才是观点
    • 注意逻辑关系 because后面
    1. 抓出对于话题的正反两方
    2. 根据双方说法需要回答什么
    3. 自己的看法
    • 高中生是否应该参加免费社区服务?
      不一定要完全同意/反对 可倾向于同意/反对
    • the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold?
      A:明星代言、宣传
      D:商品的高销量反映真实需求、个人预算和用户评价
    • getting old is entirely bad 【in the modern world】?
      A:科技发展难以跟上、空巢老人
      D:(benefits)医疗进步、娱乐方式业余生活丰富、社会福利
    • public museums will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computers?
      D:公众博物馆很重要
      储存功能、公众教育、休闲场所
    文章结构
    • 单边论证
      开头:改写题目话题和观点+(理由)+看法A
      立论:正面论证A1
      立论:A2
      立论:A3
      结尾:重申看法A+理由
      *第一段、最后30-40,中间主体70
    • 让步论证
      立论1 ➡️驳论段:提出我方不足A+解决/对方合理之处+反驳
    提纲
    示例

    练习:getting old
    不用因果、随着,直接陈述事实

    Introduction
    1. nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people...negative effects and should be banned?
    • 包含背景(全部是事实)的题目:改写背景+改写题目+表态 (3 sentences)
    • 改写句型:
      主语从句:it is true that.../not uncommonly.../it is interesting to note that...(不要原句的整体重复)
      ➡️It is true that children become target population.../many advertisers produce large quantities of advertisement in a way that attracts children...
    • 转述观点:
      some suggest that...
      it is argued that...
      it has been claimed that...
      ➡️...should not be allowed because of the possible negative effects
    • 表态
      I agree with the opinion.
      I argue against the idea.
      In my opinion,...
      My view is that...
      I contend that...
    👆

    ➡️some claim that...

    Practice

    produce a marked effect

    • as 引导的原因状语从句(第一段写的理由后面要写到)
    • 可添加相关背景(必须是前提)
    • due to +名词短语(消极)
      thanks to +n.(好)
      because of 强调因果逻辑(中性)
    • 👉Some people say that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past?

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