We went to Taishan on the Middle

The Sunrise of Tainshan

It is the first article in English in Jianshun for me.I can’t believe that I can write the experience in English before that. It’s the homework in EF class so I have to finish it.

Sometimes we can do something what we can’t believe we can.

There’s maybe a lot of mistake in this article. I don’t care about that since I believe the success is come from the failure.

Thanks for your reading.

Hi Joan，
I'd like to talk with you that Frannie and I went to Taishan mountain last weekend. Yes it is the Middle-Autumn holiday. In fact I always have a willing to climb the Taishan montain when I was young. It is begain when we learned the artical <Climb the Taishan montain in the rain> at the high school. Until last week I decided to do it. It's fantastic that Frannie decided to come with me. She said:"Companionship is the longest confession of friendship".
We took the high train and went to Taian at first then lived the hotel down the hill. The next morning we went to climb the montain and we met a lot of people came from the top. As you know it is the most famous that the sunrise of the Taishan mountain. Of course it is the main aim for us to watch the sunrise. We climbed the whole day almost and ate a lot of fruits and foods on the way.
Finally we got up to the top of the Taishan mountain and it is the good chance for us to watch the sunset at that moment. We stayed on the hotel of the top of the mountain. It's much colder than the down. A lot of people can't stay in hotel since there is less room than people. At half past 4 they called us to get up and we walked about 20 minutes to the place normited by the hotel. It's amazing when the sun was rising from the cloud. I couldn't express the fantastic scene and you can go to watch it in the future.
Best Regards
Rafen

The homework just required 200-250 words but I want to write more about that.

We watched the moon rise and moon set this time too. It happens every day but we always miss them. There is a lot of beautiful around ourselves but we ignore them generally. Just like “There is no lack of beauty in the world，but there is lack of discovery ”

When I come back from Taishan I found the sunrise and sunset in Shanghai are beautiful too.

Do you think so ?

The sunrise in Shanghai The sunset in Shanghai

Thanks for your reading.

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