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01.写单句
第二模块第三单元有一道看图写句的习题，根据提示我们写出四个句子。
1.I have seen the Beijing Opera.
2.I have eaten Beijing duck
3.I have visited the Palace Museum.
4.I have not climbed the Great Wall.
很明显这四个句子是描述自己在北京旅游，我们从这四个单纯的句子出发，把四个单句变成复合句。
在这个变化的过程中我们必须把三个肯定句组合在一起，然后加上一个否定句。
02.变复合句
三个肯定句的变化方式有两种：
第一种：
I have seen the Beijing Opera and eaten Beijing duck.I have also visited the Palace Museum.
第二种：
I have seen the Beijing Opera，eaten Beijing duck and visited the Palace Museum.
然后我们加上最后一个否定句即可。
短文一：
I have seen the Beijing Opera and eaten Beijing duck.I have also visited the Palace Museum. But I haven't climbed the Great Wall.
短文二：
I have seen the Beijing Opera，eaten Beijing duck and visited the Palace Museum. But I haven't climbed the Great Wall.
03.添加主题句成短文
短文一
I am having a wonderful time in Beijing. I have done so many things. I have seen the Beijing Opera，eaten Beijing duck and visited the Palace Museum. But it's a pity that there's only one thing that I haven't done. I haven't visited the Great Wall. I am sure I will visit it one day.
短文二
I am having a wonderful time in Beijing. I have done so many things. I have seen the Beijing Opera，and eaten Beijing duck. I have also visited the Palace Museum.
But it's a pity that there's only one thing that I haven't done. I haven't visited the Great Wall. I am sure I will visit it one day.
04.文本仿写成长文
第二单元第三段最好的仿写文，我们可以从开头出发，仿照课本中的格式进行仿写。
I love seeing the world. I have been to many wonderful places.For example,inBeijing,I have seen the Beijing Opera，eaten Beijing duck，and visited the Palace Museum. But it's a pity that there's only one thing that I haven't done. I haven't visited the Great Wall.
05.添枝加叶成作文
I love seeing the world. I have been to many wonderful places.They are all amazing . I have learned a lot from travelling.and taken many photos.
For example,in Beijing, the capital of China,I have seen the Beijing Opera，eaten Beijing duckand visited the Palace Museum. But it's a pity that there's only one thing that I haven't done. I haven't visited the Great Wall. I'm sure I will visit it next time.
06.掌握规律成万能文
学生会写北京，自然会写其它的城市，这样这个作文就成了模板。
掌握一个作文的写作思路就会成就其他的作文，我们要教会学生嫁接与剪裁，这样经过整理之后的作文才是自己的。
教，是为了不教；学，是为了更轻松地学。
在依托文本进行写作练习的训练上，我还有更远的路要走。
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