1.More and more developing countries start to cultivate their tourist resources. Some think this will benefit the economy of these nations; others insist the outweigh the merits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the development of the economy, an increasing number of developing countries begin cultivating their tourist attractions. Some worry the disadvantages will eclipse the advantages, while others content this encouragement would assist the economy of the country.
Firstly, tourists would bring income to the local economy and boost the economy.(这里可以用and 并列写两个优点) This is because when tourists spend their time in the locality, they would inevitably have to cater, accommodate and entertain themselves, which would increase the income for the local government.
Therefore, encouraging tourism would be beneficial for the nation's economy.
Over-developing the tourist site, however, would damage the local environment and brings security concern for the tourist site.（这个分论点也可以用and 并列写两个缺点） To accommodate more tourists, hotel managers have to look for new sites to build more hotels and this behavior would take up some of the natural lands, reducing habitats for wild animals. Thus damaging the local natural circumstances.
In conclusion, with low barriers to entry, tourism is a great way for developing countries to employ people while increasing their GDP. Tourism as envisioned and initiated by Rwandans should be promoted, not disparaged.
可用句式：there is a flurry of passionate and well-intentioned opinions that question the viability of tourism centered on poor villages, arguing that the benefits to be gained are outweighed by the potential for exploitation of poor people
提炼： There is a flurry of passionate and well-intentioned opinions that question the viability of ... arguing that...
可用的topic sentence 或者是总结句
tourism in Rwanda helps eradicate poverty and hunger. It makes it possible for more children to go to school. It helps bridge the divide between cultures, not deepen it. It leads to more gender equality, not more exploitation. Most importantly, it creates real, sustainable prosperity that is not dependent on charity.
With a large number of visiting tourists and a significant number of tours, this is a major injection of capital into the local economy.
可作为结论
Although often underestimated, the tourism industry can help promote peace and stability in developing countries by providing jobs, generating income, diversifying the economy, protecting the environment, and promoting cross-cultural awareness.
可作为结论
to deliver optimal benefits, tourism must be respectful of the environment and mindful of cultural and social traditions.
可作为论述段
It creates networks of different operations, from hotels and restaurants to adventure sports providers and food suppliers. This enables tourist centers to form complex and varied supply chains of goods and services, supporting a versatile labor market with a variety of jobs for tour guides, translators, cooks, cleaners, drivers, hotel managers, and other service sector workers. Many tourism jobs are flexible or seasonal and can be taken on in parallel with existing occupations, such as farming.
可作为例子
In Costa Rica, women’s handicraft cooperatives catering to the tourist market have flourished, providing many women, for the first time, with both independent incomes and improved self-esteem.
可作为结论
Frangialli identified tourism’s potential for not only protecting the natural environment, but also “preserving historical, archaeological, and religious
monuments; and stimulating the practice of local folklore, traditions, arts and crafts, and cuisine.”
对当地环境有坏的影响，表达：
conventional mass tourism often negatively affects host environments
为当地劳动力提供有形利益（一个明确的topic sentence）
offer tangible benefits to the local labor force
旅游业作用：
preserves/ conserves the environment and improves the well-being of local people.
经济型旅游业催生了（spawned）一批同一主题的变体旅游业：
ecotourism has spawned several other travel concepts that are, in essence, variations on the same theme.
These include geotourism, pro-poor tourism, sustainable tourism, responsible tourism, and travelers’ philanthropy.
They reflect the desire of many holiday goers to give something back to the places they visit, or at the very least, avoid doing them harm.
至少避免对当地造成伤害
It also analyzes some of the necessary preconditions for developing a responsible tourist industry, highlighting that ill-planned and poorly executed tourism can cause immense damage to communities and create conditions for conflict instead of peace.
造成巨大伤害： cause immense damage,
为。创造条件：create conditions for A instead of B.
负责人的旅游产业：responsible tourist industry,
Kenya has a long-established and highly successful tourist sector catering to the conventional and ecotourism markets.
历史悠久的： long-established,
非常成功的：highly successful
占xx比例：account for/make up 10% of the GDP(gross domestic product)
实现旅游经济价值：it has yet to realize tourism’s economic potential
Kenya’s, safari-based tourism industry,
旅游胜地发展：resort developments
过度xx: not overwhelmingly rosy
坏处方面的阐述：
While pockets of good practice exist, a fair share of Kenya’s tourism tramples on local customs, is indifferent to conservation, and fails to pass on economic benefits to host communities.
计划开放：be slated to open
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