Vocabulary:
1.The dismal忧郁的，沮丧的 truth is that it’s very hard.
It was a dismal failure.
2. It makes you ache for渴望 the sight of a rebellious curve or the irregular, dappled有斑点的 colour of a field where a careless farmer has allowed corn and soybeans to cohabit.
3.it had been decreed（命运）注定，裁定判决
I hope this unlucky case could urge government to decree certain law to protect children's right.
Reflection:
Choose your words with unusual care.
As for substance, be intensely selective.
两个原则，关于style和substance，而style又照应前面章节的style，substance则提到要select，要distill，写作不是记流水账，凡事面面俱到，只需要展现最合适的即可。
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