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7. Therefore, I can be able to prepare and manage things better mentally.

to do sth., to后要紧跟动词

8. walk there (错：walk to there ××！！)

9. assert=tobehavein a way that expresses your confidence, importance, or power and earns you respect from others

=to say that something is certainly true

= state

10. 少用really:  not really sure ×- change int--- not sure

11.  少用 just

12. help others better(better 后置)